9 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2008 06:21 pm Title: Chapter 16
I look forward to every new installment of 'the treehouse' with great anticipation. You never disappoint. I was thinking you might take the story in this direction - life is never without some drama. You've written the exuberant passion of young love/ first love in a realistic way. I look forward to seeing how you handle Jim and Pam's relationship after this.
Author's Response: Wow, thanks Jinx that's so kind, and I'm really happy people are enjoying this. I figured after 15 fluffy chapters it was time to mix it up.
Date: August 12, 2008 11:38 am Title: Chapter 16
I really liked the way you address this subject matter. Things like this happen. I hope you come back soon with the next. I love the two families in this and I think they will handle it the right way.
Author's Response: Thanks and I'm glad you're enjoying it. I should have more posted soon!
Date: August 06, 2008 06:37 pm Title: Chapter 14
So cute. I love how much he misses her. The Jelly line was cute when she was drunk but it was slightly hokey :) Nothing wrong with that once in a while
Author's Response: Thanks, I couldn't resist her calling him Jelly at least once, DrunkPam is a silly Pam....I'm working on the next chapter today, thanks for reading!
Date: August 06, 2008 02:59 pm Title: Chapter 15
I LOVE this fic. I was so excited to see two updates!!! Love both chapters, awesome job. I can't wait for more.
Date: July 26, 2008 08:11 am Title: Chapter 13
I LOVE this fic. I mean really love it. I love the AU story and how it's written. I cannot wait for more. I really like seeing how their teenage relationship evolved and everything.
Author's Response: Thank you, my next chapter is with my beta, the excellent Ms. Elly...hope to have it up soon, glad you're enjoying it. Who doesn't love an AU?
Date: June 30, 2008 08:56 am Title: Chapter 13
My absolute favorite chapter yet! I can't wait till she comes home.
Author's Response: Hey, thanks a bunch, you always give nice reviews, glad you liked it. It was a nail biter at first, but I enjoyed it.
8 [Report This]Date: June 20, 2008 10:56 pm Title: Chapter 12
I have really enjoyed this story, and you have done a good job of capturing those little moments that seem so big to teenagers.
Author's Response: Thanks Fluffy...love that, Darryl is so awesome. I didn't even date in high school, but I had plenty of crushes, and a boy crazy twin sister to reference. What a strange yet wonderful time in life right? Glad you like it.
8 [Report This]Date: June 16, 2008 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 12
Yikes is right - brings back memories.... pretty funny, good job. can't wait for more
Author's Response: It's funny, Elly really helped me with the virginity stuff, I was seriously a sexually frustrated virgin at 20 very close to 21. So I kind of had an idea about sex once I had.. But I still have no idea about sex at 16. I hope it was as awkward or at least believable for a first time.
9 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 08:43 pm Title: Chapter 11
After Goodbye Toby, Pam using the word 'perfect' about her relationship with Jim is not necessarily promising for the immediate future.
The Treehouse is a great read. I'm look forward to the next installment.
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying, I have some interesting stuff in mind I think, hope you like the next chapter. Thanks for reading!rn
Date: May 27, 2008 07:33 pm Title: Chapter 11
Why was there stopping?!?!?!??!?!?!? There should never be stopping!!!!!!!!!....at least not at that point. I know they're not ready to have sex but really...two teenagers....it wouldn't have ended there.
I really can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Sorry :0) We will get to that "good stuff" at some point, glad you enjoyed.
8 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2008 10:27 pm Title: Chapter 10
I needed this after the end of GBT. Actually, I look forward to new chapters of the Treehouse very much. Very sweet AU for Jim and Pam.
Author's Response: thanks, glad people like it. I needed this too after that evil ending, but ah well, as many said on the boards last night, thank god for fanfic!
9 [Report This]Date: May 08, 2008 11:15 am Title: Chapter 8
MORE!!! this is pretty good... an enjoyable twist on the usual format - MORE!!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 05, 2008 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 7
I love that her parents had something planned for her! I also liked that you didn't have Jim and Pam jump into something they're not quite ready for yet and you're taking your time with it. Good job with this chapter. Can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: thanks elly! I am loving writing this, and i didn't forget your offer to help look it over, i probably will send you the next chapter for a preview and your opinion.
Date: May 03, 2008 07:36 am Title: Chapter 1
What a great birthday. I can't wait to read about the rest of th weekend!
Date: May 03, 2008 12:22 am Title: Chapter 7
Aw, very cute idea! I knew her parents were up to something!
10 [Report This]Date: April 28, 2008 09:25 am Title: Chapter 6
Wow, this story makes me want to go back to high school and I HATED high school. (maybe because Jim Halpert wasn't there, but Tanya Harding was!!!!!)
9 [Report This]Date: April 26, 2008 02:22 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'm really glad you updated this story! I had begun to worry that you had abandoned it! If you want a beta or need someone to run ideas by, you can email me at ellymarie4888@gmail.com! Hope you update soon!
Date: April 26, 2008 02:14 pm Title: Chapter 6
Aw, very cute chapter. I like the description of high school life and the banter between Jim and Pam was very sweet. I loved the description of Jon and Jeff going off to university.
Just a little note, since I am a total English snob - Macbeth isn't a novel, and doesn't have chapters. Unless there is a novel called Macbeth that I haven't heard of, in which case ignore me!
Date: April 16, 2008 01:56 am Title: Chapter 5
Aw... that was so incredibly sweet!
Date: April 15, 2008 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 5
finally a kiss.
I can't wait for the school year stuff.
10 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 5
this was the sweetest chapter of all of them! I cannot wait until they start going to school together and establish their relationship! Please update soon!
Date: April 15, 2008 06:16 am Title: Chapter 1
I just realized I haven't said how much I am loving this story. It's very cute reading about them being younger but still so connected. Hope you do get the next part up today.
Date: April 15, 2008 12:22 am Title: Chapter 4
I'm really ejoying this story - it's a good idea for an AU and it's really sweet... and Jon is so funny. I love all of Jim and Pam's conversations and the suger pizza is hilarious! Can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 08:37 am Title: Chapter 3
This is so cute. I love that you changed the banter between Jim and Pam to fit their respective mindsets in this AU. I love that Jim's mom noticed Jim and Pam's blushing at each other! I gotta know.... Does Jim kiss Pam at the end of this date? Maybe I should get a new hobby and stop being so invested in 2 fictional characters' dates! I really hope you update this soon!
Date: April 13, 2008 09:20 pm Title: Chapter 3
The whole paint fight was entertaining. I can't wait for the date.