8 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2008 07:38 pm Title: Stargazing
This was lovely. My favorite line:
"Nights when the darkness seemed unnatural in its length, and when its reluctant retreat only marshaled forward another day of regret and tortured daydreams at her desk."
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it. I'm (as my previous stories indicate) not one prone to poetic prose at all. I leave that to the better writers around here, but I'm glad that it worked for you. Thanks for taking the time to review kaystar.
Date: April 11, 2008 07:36 am Title: Stargazing
mmm, a perfect dessert for a lovely dinner party ;o)
Author's Response: Haha, well I don't know about a "lovely" dinner party, but I appreciate the compliment, nonetheless. Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate it lisahoo.
Date: April 10, 2008 11:19 pm Title: Stargazing
That was nice. I loved it!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked it! Thanks for reviewing malaz85.
Date: April 10, 2008 09:12 am Title: Stargazing
That was absolutely beautiful. I really enjoyed it all: every sentence, every description. You did a wonderful job writing this and I really loved it.
"It was of an unspoken familiarity that promised that there would be time for many more in the future."
That line was spectacular! Really great job; I can't wait to read more of your work!
Author's Response: Thank you so for such an awesome review! I'm glad that you liked it, I had a fun job writing it. Thanks again, flonkertonxx.
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 06:01 am Title: Stargazing
i LOVE this!!! ahhhhh. *sigh* Fav'ing right. now.
Author's Response: Awesome, thanks! I'm glad that you liked it, it was definitely something different for me, so I was a little nervous as to how people would react to it. I imagined something like....."um....yeah, no." Still, thank you for reviewing Sharipep!
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 05:45 am Title: Stargazing
That was blissful.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad that you go that vibe from it, which is one word is probably what I was going for. Thanks for the review NanReg.
Date: April 10, 2008 04:16 am Title: Stargazing
Very sweet.
Author's Response: Thank you, that was what I was going for! Thank you for taking the time to review as well ISayOye.