8 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 10:38 am Title: ...with Icing on Top
Really excellent, I thought it really stayed in character for both of them. I loved it. Smut and heart both.
Author's Response: Thanks dreamscribe70! Smut and heart is the best combo, right? I so appreciate your review!
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 08:47 am Title: Chocolate Cake...
P.S. More June 10th soon PLEEEEEEEEEEEEASE...
Author's Response: Ah, Nan. Good things come to those who wait (I hope? I haven't actually written any more June 10th, but I'm hoping . . . )
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 08:30 am Title: ...with Icing on Top
perfect!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 08:24 am Title: ...with Icing on Top
who'd of guessed that tuna and chocolate cake would go so well together? lol
this was great wendolf. you write them spot on everytime!
Author's Response: Ha! Tuna and chocolate cake ;-) Can you imagine a worse taste combination? Anyway, thanks for your review -- so nice!
Date: April 11, 2008 07:24 am Title: ...with Icing on Top
Wow, wendolf, you really raised the bar with this chapter, taking it to a whole other level. You really got inside Pam's head, how her brain talked her body out of satisfaction, and trusting Jim enough to tell him what she likes.
I also really like that what's different with Jim is not that he's some magically-endowed fantastic lover, but that there is a level of maturity, of knowing himself and listening to Pam that makes the connection work.
Author's Response: Thanks so much lisahoo! Yeah, I think we all love the idea of Jim as a sexual dynamo but really . . . those guys are few and very far between (especially at 28?). I think the idea of him just trying, of caring enough to try, is so appealing. (And of course, since I'm the author, he has to succeed, right?) anyway, I really appreciate your review, as always. Thanks for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: April 11, 2008 07:18 am Title: ...with Icing on Top
Thanks for the quick update, wendolf. Absolutely loved this story.
He was a hidden treasure. In lots of ways. Sigh.
Author's Response: Yep. That Jim is a total treasure. Thanks for reviewing, Nan!
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 10:42 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
Umm...yes. Wow, that was...beyond hot. I like this version of Pam. It really fits with her personality (as FNB as she is now) and its totally rational that Jim would be assertive where Roy just...wasn't. So yay for the discovering of chocolate cake...and can we please have more of this fic? As in...way more? :)
Author's Response: Yeah, honey, I think it's just more important to Jim (as a person . . . as a man to make sure he gives and not just takes his cake, if you know what I mean. Thanks for your review -- glad you liked it!
Date: April 10, 2008 07:59 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
Wow. You really delivered, missy. Or should I say, Jim did.
Please tell me your eye doctor does NOT do this to you
Ha! And this too: C it is. Funny and sexy as a sexilicious thing. Now, all I want to know is does Jim offer these services as a private tutor? And can you post part II like yesterday?
Author's Response: Hmmm. Jim as a sex tutor! There's an AU fic if ever I heard one... Anyway, thanks so much for your review. I love when I get specifics ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 07:49 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
Chocolate cake, indeed. I never dreamed that this night could get any better than it already was...but IT DID! wendolf, you are a rockstar.
Author's Response: You are a rockstar, for being such a loyal reader and reviewer! Thanks so much!
Date: April 10, 2008 07:47 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
HOT
Author's Response: THANKS!
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 06:59 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
HOT.
Amazing.
Sweet.
I can't wait for more! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoyed it.
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 06:55 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
Wow.
Author's Response: Short but sweet! Thanks grapejelly!
Date: April 10, 2008 05:35 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
Without revealing too much about myself in this anonymous (and yet not) forum, I can TOTALLY relate to Pam - and unfortunately, my last boyfriend was no Jim Halpert. Sigh.
Wait, a review of this story is what this is for - not a confessional. Right. EXCELLENT work. And I'm ready for Pam's "different plans" now :)
Author's Response: Aw, Jenn . . . who CAN'T relate to Pam ;-) Seriously. And unfortunately for ALL of us, there are not a lot of Jim's out there on a quest for chocolate cake for us. They want their cake and to eat it too . . . wait. TWSS? I don't know... anyway, thanks for your review!
Date: April 10, 2008 04:49 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
God I love you.
I like this approach. I feel like Pam is really a mystery and she could totally be a crazy sex goddess or she could be exactly as you described her here. I kinda like this version...Jim being like a naughty teacher....ugh
you are just my favorite
Author's Response: I just try to picture Pam, being with her first lover for 10 years (especially Pam as she was pre-FNB -- not particularly honest or brave) and then how she'd be with Jim. I'm sure a part of her just wants to come out of her sexual shell, so to speak, but unbreaking 10 years of sexual history ain't easy. So thanks! Glad you enjoyed this!
Date: April 10, 2008 04:13 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
holy bejesus!!!! i just went to happy hour (it is a HAPPY day after all!) and i came home to find this! seriously!!!!!! this is just so amazing and so appreciated! we need something like this right now. you know i love what you do, wendolf, but you've out done yourself here! and...holy eff! it's not a one shot!!!!! you've made my night (well, i mean, you and Dinner Party ;))! AWESOME!
Author's Response: Thanks Catie! You are too kind. Glad it made your happy day happier!
Date: April 10, 2008 03:57 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
That was Excellent! You're becoming one of my favorite writers!
B
Author's Response: Gee, thanks batman! Great to hear!
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 03:35 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
Guh. That was beyond hot. And I'm with you. I think our little Pamster might have been a little reticent about her own needs when she was with Roy. I can easily imagine (more than you want to know, trust me.....) this scenario with Jim and Pam.
Author's Response: Hey, my friend. Glad you enjoyed that bit -- thought you might. Yeah, this one just made sense to me . . . we've all been where Pam was (well, maybe not a lucky few -- and unfortunately for all of us, none of us have been with Jim) and know what it's like to have to be sexually brave ;-) Ain't always easy. Thanks for reviewing, as always.
Date: April 10, 2008 03:35 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
btw You're my favorite writer on MTT right now - you're always putting great stuff on and even your work in progress pieces are updated frequently. Thank you. Also I imagine this is more of Pam's style as well.
Author's Response: Wow./Jim that is quite a compliment. I don't like the idea of one of my babies out there, unfinished or unattended to. So I do try to update quickly. Hopefully I'll have some more June 10th soon! REALLY appreciate your comments.
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 03:31 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
Ok, I read it....I've come to the conclusion there is way too much jello in my house!!!!
Author's Response: Hee! Yeah, we have Jell-o here, too, but no chocolate cake! What's up with that??! Thanks DS -- appreciate your reading and taking the time to comment!
Date: April 10, 2008 03:22 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
Sweet jeebus, wendolf! You know how to celebrate a dinner party!
“Please tell me your eye doctor does NOT do this to you.” I would be over my deductible every year if mine did that. But then, my eye doctor is named Dr. Kapoor, so that's something...
Author's Response: Do you WANT Dr. Kapoor do that to you??? Does he look like Jim? Hmmm. Maybe I need to switch eye doctors... Thanks as always, lisa, for your awesome reviews!
10 [Report This]Date: April 10, 2008 03:22 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
Smut cake + wendolf= my two favorite things..I'm so excited about this fic that I haven't even read it yet!! I'm reviewing without reading!!! WTF!!
Author's Response: Wow . . . a pre-read review! How flattering, DunderSnob! You rock!
Date: April 10, 2008 03:18 pm Title: Chocolate Cake...
I don't think I have words....just more. Lots more please.
Author's Response: Hee! Thanks ISayOye! Glad you liked it!