1 [Report This]Date: October 24, 2021 07:33 pm Title: Awesomeful
The Jam is adorable, and Angela's voice felt true to her, but I think my favorite section here was Jan's. It feels like you hit on a non-cartoony version of her inner monologue that still fits with the relatively cartoony season 4 Jan, not an easy bar to clear.
8 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 11:06 pm Title: Awesomeful
"Awesomeful.
My new favorite word. Used in a sentence:
I think sillyrabbit519 is awesomeful.
Author's Response:
No, no, it's you who are awesomeful.
Date: April 15, 2008 11:44 am Title: Awesomeful
Fun. I especially liked the Angela and Andy, and getting into Angela's head a little bit there.
Author's Response: Angela's always been one of my favorites. And I love Andy. He's so ridiculous and awesome.
Date: April 15, 2008 07:10 am Title: Awesomeful
This was really nice...I especially liked your glimpses into the people who have happiness within their reach, but don't know how to grab hold of it. You went very deep with very few words. Very good writing.
--Strider
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! Angela and Michael break my heart, and are so interesting to me, because both of them could be happy, they just have to let themselves. Michael has to stop being so shallow, and Angela has to stop being so judgemental of everyone, including herself.
Date: April 14, 2008 10:20 pm Title: Awesomeful
Very cute!
Author's Response: Thanks!
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 07:49 am Title: Awesomeful
Brilliant. This story flowed so well. Love how you tied everyone together with "That's not a word" and gave us little glimpses of each relationship, each glimpse so insightful. Great, great job. Can't wait to read it again.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: April 14, 2008 04:48 am Title: Awesomeful
Cute fic. And abulia was the word of the day on dictionary.com yesterday!
Author's Response: I know! I actually wasn't sure what word I was going to use, and it just happened to be the word of the day and it fit! I love when things work out like that.
Date: April 14, 2008 03:40 am Title: Awesomeful
Oh, I loved seeing glimpses of all of these couples - perfectly written, wonderfully in-character - you managed to keep the tone consistent despite jumping between various moods [happiness, sadness, anger], and how you could feel those as almost palpable as you read it - and I love that this is one of the first times I've read convincingly written happy!Kelly/Darryl, which is awesome. :D And I absolutely adore your writing style. :D
Loved this. :D
Author's Response: Aw, thanks! I think Kelly and Darryl could be happy, if, like he said, she could just lose some of the crazy. I'm so glad you liked it!
Date: April 13, 2008 08:56 pm Title: Awesomeful
this was good, i would love to see jim lose at strip scrabble *smiles devilishly*
Author's Response: Oh man, me too. Like stat.
10 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2008 08:48 pm Title: Awesomeful
This story is awesomefull. Really, it is. First, you totally nailed the "voice" for each of these characters. There are so many good lines - it's hard to pick my favorite. Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!
9 [Report This]Date: April 13, 2008 08:46 pm Title: Awesomeful
That was really sweet and awesomeful!! Poor Michael but yay Kelly!!! I just want to see her happy and I think you did a great job showing Darryl's soft side for her. :)
Author's Response: I think Darryl has fun with her, and I think that's enough for him. Plus, I love Kelly. I think she's absolutely hysterical. I'm glad you liked it!