10 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yes! College sexcapades! Pam fantasies! More! More!
Author's Response: Thanks for your input, VB! Onto the fantasies next, I guess . . .
Date: April 15, 2008 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
Another great chapter, wendolph! Great dialogue, funny, very believable. If you do write another chapter, you can gloss over Jim's college career without getting into too many sordid details, then have him continue his line of questioning about Pam's "hypothetical" sex life with him. Then of course, he could oblige her wishes. Just a suggestion from someone who wouldn't mind a wee bit more to this story.
Author's Response: Mmm, oblige her wishes, huh? Nice. I'll see what I can do... Thanks for reviewing, EH!
Date: April 15, 2008 06:47 pm Title: Chapter 2
I liked this and I do hope you continue. It might be kinda neat if Jim's college sexcapades either gave Pam some ideas/incentive for the future, or just really turned her on. Maybe I'm on a smut kick, but I reread a similiar story last night and it was very cool.
Author's Response: Who isn't on a smut kick? ;-) Thanks so much for your review, Jenn!
7 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 2
Definatly want to hear more of the sexcapades. Love this story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing PBandJ09! I'll see what I can do...
7 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 06:43 pm Title: Chapter 2
Definatly want to hear more of the sexcapades. Love this story.
Author's Response: Ah, who doesn't want to hear of Jim's sexcapades?! Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, PBandJ09!
Date: April 15, 2008 06:24 pm Title: Chapter 2
very nice, i like that you didn't add that brenda from the booze cruise, i did't like her at all, i'm glad she was left to the deleted scenes for drug testing.
Author's Response: Yeah, totally with you on Brenda. Ick. Jim's got better taste than boring bland corporate girl, doesn't he? Anyway, thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 06:18 pm Title: Chapter 2
Oh, darling, you most certainly know who your audience is, and I think you know the answer to your question: a resounding YES YES YES!
wendolf, you are way too critical of your immense (!) talent. This story is sublime--the dialog, the intimacy...simply delectable. Between you and stablergirl today, it's like vanilla and chocolate and I love them both equally. Sigh. LOVE LOVE LOVE yet again today. I am satisfied and smiling (yet greedy) ; ) Off to read this again...
Author's Response: Nan, you are too kind. To be lumped in the same vanilla/chocolate sundae as stablergirl is quite a compliment. Thanks so much for reading and reviewing. You're awesome.
10 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 05:32 pm Title: Chapter 2
i love this story. i am SO down for more. love love love in love Jim and Pam. :)
Author's Response: Who doesn't love in love Jim and Pam. They just make the world a better place. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 15, 2008 05:14 pm Title: Chapter 2
I'll say what I always say when writers ask if they should continue: if you think you should, for the story you want to tell. (How's that for an annoying answer?) Having said that, do I want to know more about Jim's...uh, college education? Damn right I do. God is in the details, and the one about the dryer buzzer going off, in the gf's parents' basement, is so perfectly high school (and the Maytag line is great - so Jim.) This is - as usual - delicious and believable. Yay you!
Author's Response: You are a wise, wise woman, Colette! Diplomatic and yet not afraid to share your own needs or desires ;-) Glad you liked the buzzer and the Maytag. That line just seemed very Jim to me. Thanks as always for your awesome reviews. Seriously.
10 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 05:06 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yes! Please continue!
I love the dialogue--I think it's important that they learn about each other so that they can fill in the blanks between being best friends and a couple. And the smut/fluff is just an added bonus ;)
Author's Response: Yeppers, there are still a lot of blanks to fill in, I think. That's the good thing about this show and its fic -- gives us a lot to work with. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: April 15, 2008 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 2
You should continue this. I would write more but between reading all of this fic and stablergirl's latest chapter, I'm unable to form coherent sentences.
Author's Response: Yeah, stablergirl's "famous" will do that to you. I've been known to lose my sentences because of her as well... Thanks for being able to put some words together for me! So appreciated.
10 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 2
Do we want to hear more about Jim's sexcapades in college?
Pardon my language, but HELL YEAH, WE DO!
This story rocks my socks.
Author's Response: Rocks my socks. Love that, jillyree. Thanks so much for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: April 15, 2008 04:20 pm Title: Chapter 2
um you should definitely continue this!!!!! i love it, along with everything you write, and am eagerly awaiting more :)
Author's Response: Thanks waltisafox! (Who's walt, by the way?) Truly appreciate your reviews!
Date: April 15, 2008 04:08 pm Title: Chapter 1
I LOVE this story!!! Please, please, please keep going with it. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks Sophie!
Date: April 15, 2008 03:59 pm Title: Chapter 2
Umm, let me think. YES!
And add a little bit of what those eight women are missing out on now, if you don't mind. Let me know if you need more inspiration ;o)
Author's Response: Ah, those poor eight women. Let Jim Halpert slip through their fingers... More for us, though. Thanks, lisahoo!
Date: April 15, 2008 06:07 am Title: Chapter 1
This sounds good. Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thanks gotkona . . . really appreciate your reading and reviewing!
Date: April 14, 2008 11:02 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was hot! More..encore!! lol
Author's Response: Thanks slpchic! Glad you're enjoying the heat!
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 08:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
wendolf, I swear, your smut is the prettiest of all the smut. Or something.
I can totally see them having this conversation. You know Jim's been with at the very least a few women, but not too many, so 9 is a good number, I think. Also, I can totally imagine Pam being a little self conscious about the fact that she hasn't been with anyone else besides Roy and Jim. However, Pam has time and the ability to perfect her form over the past 9 years on her side, lol.
Can't wait for more, of course. I'm excited to learn who the other 6 are!
Author's Response: Yeah, I couldn't decide if 9 seemed like a lot or not. I'm no prude, but I met my husband when I was pretty young, so my number is not very high . . . I can relate to Pam's feelings on this one. Maybe TMI, there. But thanks so much for reading and reviewing!!!
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
So...I just want to clarify that you can write as many of these as you please! Learning a little more about Jim's past sounds enticing, and hell, if you'd want to throw in a little about Pam's past too, I don't think anyone would protest. Anyway, I loved this...very cute. I love the familiarity of Pam and Jim in your fics. You really get their dialog and characters and everything just flows really well. So, everything turns out really believable, from the making out with the little conversation breaks to Jim urging Pam to tell him what she wants. I'm gonna stop rambling right now, but great job, as per usual!
Author's Response: Honey, you can ramble any time you like! I love your reviews! Thanks for them, as always... Glad my Jim and Pam seem real to you.
10 [Report This]Date: April 14, 2008 07:48 pm Title: Chapter 1
As always, Wendolf, you deliver the goods! Looking forward to more!
Author's Response: I'm a smut peddler. What can I say? Thanks VB. You're so nice to read and review!
Date: April 14, 2008 07:36 pm Title: Chapter 1
Hmm...eight others, not including our FNB. That's a potential eight more chapters, with intermissions between each for some more "chocolate cake". I could go for that. Jim can share what he "learned" from each encounter with Pam. That is what you're planning, right?
This is excellent. And stablergirl posting right after you. A happy Monday indeed!
Author's Response: EH, your plan is much more ambitious than mine ;-) But I like the chocolate cake intermissions ;-) Thanks for reading and reviewing. Makes my Mondays happier, too!
Date: April 14, 2008 03:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
I love when I see a new story by you on the "recent" page. Great job - steamy hot and super fab! Can't wait to see what's next ;)
Author's Response: Thanks, Jenn! I love when I see your reviews!
Date: April 14, 2008 02:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Bless you wendolf. Just when I think it's going to be a smutty one-shot, you come up with bonus gifts. I really shouldn't read these during the day when HooHusband is at work and can't um, benefit from all this reading.
Author's Response: Just let the bonus gifts build, lisa. Delayed gratification isn't so bad ;-) Thanks, as always, for your awesome reviews.
Date: April 14, 2008 01:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
You Made My Day! Thanks for shout-out.:)! I agree with NanReg-you are required to finish June 10th. These rules are unflinchingly rigid. (sp?) I also need more chocolate cake, 'cuz I KNOW you know how to bake!
Author's Response: Well, June 10th is done, and Chocolate Cake as well. Guess I'll have to start a new fic soon.... Thanks so much for reading and reviewing -- you're the best!
Date: April 14, 2008 01:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
I definetly love the begining! Can't wait to see what you have in store in the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hope you enjoyed chapter 2, bee sly! Thanks for taking the time to review!