Date: September 14, 2006 05:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
What a great story! It's one of the best Casino night fics I've read...those two little words offer Jim and us some real hope.
It's a wonderful first story!
Author's Response: Aw! Thanks so much! I'm glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2006 11:26 am Title: Chapter 1
So good, Smurfette729! You do a terrific job of getting inside these two's heads.
Author's Response: Thanks!
7 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2006 11:23 am Title: Chapter 1
I had missed this one originally. I love the ending!
Author's Response: Thanks! It makes me grin. Can I say that if I wrote it? :)
8 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2006 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
"Not yet." EEEP!
Great job for a first-timer!
Author's Response: Good! That's the exact response I was hoping for with that!
7 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2006 10:21 am Title: Chapter 1
"Flesh and blood and soul-consuming love" - goose bumps! Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks. I think that may be my favorite line.
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2006 10:13 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. You really captured the inner monologue and turmoil of these two. I really enjoyed this a lot! You said at TWoP that this was your first - I hope you'll continue to write!
Author's Response: Thanks! I've got one that's almost done and a few more ideas, so definitely continuing!
10 [Report This]Date: July 12, 2006 09:23 am Title: Chapter 1
One of my all time favorites. I love this story, so very well written. I still can't believe it was your first!
Author's Response: You can't see it, but I'm blushing right now. Thanks!