Date: April 22, 2008 08:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
I get squeeing even with just a mention of CM. And I love the fact (already) that you are talking about it from Jim's point of view, which is honestly something I've never thought of. Honestly, in the thousand times of watching that scene, I never thought of how much of what Pam or Jim was thinking. I just was squeeing with happiness.
Oh, if only the office knew it wasn't a mistake. It was a prank. And evil evil evil fun prank.
Wow. I am getting nervous just because Jim is nervous!
" He loves her so much it’s frying his brain, and he doesn’t care." I love hat so much!
Ad then my heart falls when Jim sees Pam. :(!
" because they both know that his kiss is the best way to make everything better again." I'd like to test that. Just once. Or ten thousand times.
Oh Andy, you better not ruin it. You better not!
Aww, and then that look, that look hurts even reading about it. Pam he wasn't trying to hurt you. Really. God, reading about it hurts.
Wow. But the last one - perfect.
and just told my friend (we are both reading it now) - finished and loved it.
Because its true.
Wow. How am I going to sleep now!? Too much happy thoughts.
Date: April 20, 2008 07:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Um...adorable.
Date: April 19, 2008 09:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aww, so cute! Good job :)
Date: April 19, 2008 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yay! Proposal fic! It's the only thing that will make Thursday come.
I love that Jim is addicted to the rush, "it feels so right, so wonderful, being down on one knee and looking up into her eyes, it’s like the first hit of a drug that goes right to his head. And he loves it so much that he wants to do it again, get in as many of those moments as he can before the real one puts an end to them forever."
And I love that he's not giving any spoilers. You rock, cloudyskies!
9 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 06:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh are you the evil genius! Giving us that he did propose and that Pam did say yes, but leaving the actual moment up to our (admittedly fruitful) imaginations. Brilliant!
I love how this is so full of both the tenderness and the joyfulness that makes Jim so very...well...Jim. And this moment?
He laughs at himself, in the elevator on the way up to the top floor. He’s been without her for less than forty-eight hours, and already he’s falling apart…
And then he reaches into his coat pocket and he says to himself, that’s okay, because after tonight he’ll never have to be without her ever again.
Utterly swoonworthy. Me loves!!!
Date: April 19, 2008 03:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
I actually love that you didn't include the actual proposal - I really have my doubts that they'd show it on the show. How unromantic would it be of Jim to propose in front of the cameras?! Either way, this story KILLED me. It was so in touch with Chair Model, and Jim's characterization was dead on.
10 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 12:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
I really like this. I like how Jim comes to the realization that it's not funny anymore and it's actually becoming hurtful. I also love that Pam is excited for him to ask her - since many people think otherwise after the new episode the other night.
Great job!
Date: April 19, 2008 12:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
This story was great, my favorite was definitely when she was sick. I loved how you wrote them all, and I needed this, considering I've now been reading how "Pam will say no" and all of that stupid depression. :)
10 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 12:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
loved it! although I want to see him propose for real, DAMMIT! if the show doesn't let us get THAT much I'll be sooo mad. hahaha. anyway, this was tons of fun, thanks for sharing :)
9 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 09:43 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow. I loved this. You totally captured both of them and had such cute and clever ways for the "almost" propposals. Congrats on posting your first story here, and I hope we'll be seeing lots more from you!
Date: April 19, 2008 09:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Fantastic! I could get into the show doing it something like that. Great Job!
10 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 08:49 am Title: Chapter 1
This was adorable! I kind of like (though my shipper heart kind of hates) the fact that you left the actual proposal up to the reader's imagination. I can only hope that the show does them justice when the time comes.
Anyway, awesome job!