10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 08:11 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh my God. If this ever happened I would die.
Date: April 24, 2008 12:28 am Title: Chapter 1
This is beautifully written. Absolutely gorgeous.
And yet, if this happens, I will burn Utica to the ground. The other possibility is that every single piece of copier paper in this town is going to have the F-word on it. The F-word. You have one day.
I also would be extremely mad at Pam. I'd want to kick her in her Fancy New Beesly ass.
But again, beautiful, beautiful writing. How can some[thing] so beautiful be so sad? (/Kelly, Boys and Girls)
Date: April 22, 2008 01:46 pm Title: Chapter 1
wow. i think it broke my heart. I don't want it to happen of course, but it is so amazingly well written that even if it does it will be great.
Date: April 21, 2008 02:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
Okay, the first time I read this, I'd had two glasses of wine and was afraid to review, lest I sound like a rambling, drunken idiot. :o) I'm relieved to say, though, that I'm totally sober at the moment and fully intend to say exactly what I was going to say the first time I read it: Your stuff is like my favorite restaurant; I know that whenever I go there, I'm just guaranteed to love whatever I order, even if it may be something completely different than I expected. Your work is exactly the same way for me; it just never, ever disappoints. This is no exception. While I'm definitely in the camp that says Pam's going to say yes, I still appreciate the beauty of your prose -- spare and lovely and just breathtaking.
So in a nutshell: Well done!
10 [Report This]Date: April 20, 2008 08:36 am Title: Chapter 1
I REALLY loved this, unfold. As I told you on LJ, this isn't quite how I'd like it all to go down on the show, but I could read this over and over again just for the absolute beauty of your writing and imagery. I could see her saying no like this and perhaps taking a few steps back, but I suppose I'll have to be patient to see how it goes down on the show. You've done a wonderful job here, and I really loved this! --CH
Date: April 19, 2008 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
omg this is depressing but i love it
Date: April 19, 2008 09:15 pm Title: Chapter 1
So beautifully written and surprisingly believable. And I don't mean that because of your writing (which I absolutely love!) I mean because of the idea. Heartbreaking- but wonderful.
8 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 07:42 pm Title: Chapter 1
"The ring stays where it is for weeks, because he’s hoping."
Poor, poor Jim. I actually hate Pam here for doing this to him.
10 [Report This]Date: April 19, 2008 07:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Beautifully written and oh-so-heartbreaking.