Date: April 24, 2008 09:10 pm Title: Hot Little Biddy
As much as I love the smut (I mean really love the smut. Ask Elly!) I'd love for Pam and Jim to talk more.
Author's Response: Pam and Jim are going to be talking more and more. rnElly is wonderful isn't she?rnThank you for your insight
Date: April 24, 2008 09:10 pm Title: Hot Little Biddy
I am loving this very smutty story. I look forward to new updates and it makes me all happy when i see them.
I can't wait for more smut. Plus i love the whole Jim/Pam dynamic you created.
Author's Response: I'm glad the story makes you happy! Reviews make me happy so thank you
10 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2008 08:44 pm Title: Hot Little Biddy
I want to marry you and have you write smut for me every day of our lives! You have a true smutty gift!
Author's Response: I accept! Thank you for the lovely offer and review
Date: April 24, 2008 08:20 pm Title: Smokey the Bear
dude, this is so great. this is some of the best smut writing i've ever read
Author's Response: Wow I don't know about that but thank you so much for saying it!
Date: April 24, 2008 04:17 pm Title: Smokey the Bear
OMG!! I need a cold shower! Damn! I love it! I can't wait for the "month" to begin. Absolutely FANTASTIC! I'm curious if there will be plans after the "month" I love how Dwight is "smokey the bear"! Hilarious, yet the mood was playful and dirty. A great combination in my book. I'm off to my shower, please post again soon!
Author's Response: Does anyone ever REALLY take cold showers? That would not be pleasant. I guess that's the point huh? Thank you for continuing to read and review!! rnrnIt makes my day
Author's Response: Does anyone ever REALLY take cold showers? That would not be pleasant. I guess that's the point huh? Thank you for continuing to read and review!! rnrnIt makes my day
Date: April 24, 2008 03:48 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun
My eyebrows are swimming in my hairline!
Hot. Hot. Hot.
Author's Response:
ahhhh... i see what you did there...
Thank you for reviewing and more importantly, the update on your eyebrow position. (tehe)
Also, now I can't get that song out of my head, "Feeling hot hot hot!"
Date: April 24, 2008 02:43 pm Title: Smokey the Bear
this story is like riding Jim, i effing love it...sooooo HOT
Author's Response: Well thank you very effing much!
Date: April 24, 2008 10:49 am Title: Smokey the Bear
God I wish reviews were like... okay, stopping that thought now... :P
Great great great chapter! I'm shameless and I don't care who knows it - I LOVED this update! :D Can't wait to read how they deal with being alone for a month. Or how Jon will react.
Author's Response:
Awww... thank you!
Jon's return will definitely be interesting. IDK, what would you do with Jim if you had him alone for a month?
10 [Report This]Date: April 24, 2008 10:19 am Title: Smokey the Bear
Wow if review are like riding Jim, how do I get some? :)
This is a great story. I love young Jim and Pam. Your Jim seems like a perfect blend of his prankster and romantic. Can we make a real life version of him? :)
Can't wait for more!! One whole month of Jam loving...sounds good to me!! :)
Author's Response:
We can. I have something in the works as we speak! You've seen "Weird Science" right?
okay, that's a lie, but MAN do I wish we could all have a Jim.
Thank you for reading and reviewing! Please stick around for more...
Date: April 24, 2008 06:07 am Title: Smokey the Bear
Jim is such a stud but still has time to tease Dwight. I love it.
Author's Response:
Oh good! I'm so glad you liked it because I was worried about writing Dwight... He's intense.
Date: April 24, 2008 05:28 am Title: Smokey the Bear
If reviews are like riding Jim I figure I have to do my duty. I love dirty talk so I'm extremely happy. As much as I love smut I can't wait to see how this changes her relationship with Jon and how every one else deals with the idea of Jim and Pam together.
Author's Response:
I know how Jon will react ;)...
Dirty talk is an acquired taste. I happen to love it and am so glad that you do as well... Or else I'd be the "creepy freaky chick," but I now know that I am not alone !
Thank you for reading they dirty dirty and for dropping me a line!
Date: April 23, 2008 04:28 pm Title: Bonnie and Clyde
Loved it, but I'm terrified Pam's mom will look over the fence into the pool ... take it inside or I'm gonna have a nervous breakdown!! Haha.
Glad these kids have started to resolve their differences! ;)
Author's Response:
How did Pam not worry about that?
Whoops...My bad! I (Jim and Pam)got all wrapped up in the smut. That is a VERY legitimate concern!
I'm very happy you liked it. Thank you!
Date: April 23, 2008 11:47 am Title: Bonnie and Clyde
i love this story soooo much please continueee sooon!
Author's Response:
Okay. But only because you asked so nicely...
Seriously, I'm trying to update as quickly as possible... so stay tuned!
Thank you so much for reading it and loving it
Date: April 23, 2008 06:39 am Title: Bonnie and Clyde
Good Ole Jim, helping Pam find her true sexual self.;)
Author's Response:
How Pamela got her groove back, if you will. and i think you will...
Thank you for reading my story and (presumably) for liking it!
Date: April 23, 2008 05:51 am Title: Bonnie and Clyde
I think I started yelling at Elly when I finally got to the end of this chapter. How can you end a chapter this good with an ending like that? There's something very cruel about making me have to use my imagination. I've been loving the story so far but I don't know how much torture I can handle. Please write more soon.
Author's Response: Funny you should say that... Elly yelled at me!rnrnHang in there I promise there is more to come
Date: April 23, 2008 12:56 am Title: Bonnie and Clyde
Why do you need another one - Bonnie and Clyde were totally the best! ;) Great chapter- I love Jim in this, the way he treats Pam is so sweet, and her starting to realise he's not that bad. Oh, and it's totally hot too! Can't wait for the next update!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Jim isn't all that bad at all... I think I may be in love with this Jim (is that weird?) I'll fight ya for him!
8 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2008 10:15 pm Title: Bonnie and Clyde
All I've got is Thelma & Louise, which is not really right on several levels...at any rate this was very hot and I can't wait for it to get hotter!
I love the little glimpses we get they perhaps Jim has had a "thing" for Bees Knees, if I'm not mistaken. Would be very curious to know what he's been thinking during these chaps.
Author's Response:
lol That was all I could come up with as well and Jim is definitely NOT a girl. There will be at least one "Jim POV" chapter. I'm glad you liked the hottness... I hope I can bring the hotter...ness.
Thank you!
Date: April 22, 2008 09:32 pm Title: Bonnie and Clyde
HOT! i would like to hear all about this taste test of Jim's.
Author's Response:
Hear about? Or experience...
Thank you so much for reading my lil ole story!
P.S. The whole "Urkelgrue" scene with Jim and Michael is one of my favorites... I'm not exactly sure why, but i laugh out loud every time i see it.
Date: April 22, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Bonnie and Clyde
For the life of me I cannot come up with any duos besides Bonnie and Clyde. Anyway, this is a really HOT chapter and I love the combination of them talking and well...yah. And I love how Jim finally showed his softer side. I can't wait for an update!
Author's Response:
Thank you for trying... Thelma & Louise maybe?
The combination of talking and well... gets me all "yah" just writing it...I'm so glad someone other than myself likes that :) Thank you!
10 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2008 08:21 pm Title: Bonnie and Clyde
Okay, this is just amazing.
I couldn't even pretend they weren't my underwear because the clever (for an 8th grader) little prick added a sign to the pole saying, "2 for $5 today only! These panties are the BEES KNEES!" Everyone knew that’s what Jim has always called me.
I love, love the underwear story, and that little gem made me laugh out loud. As did many of your lines:
“Just get in, you're sweating a little and you kind of smell like a chain-smoking alcoholic French fry.”
Right...THAT'S WHY
If this is how it feels when you hate each other, then fuck love.
“Your brother is a dork. Why are you being so nice to me?”
“Because you’re letting me."
I ask what he's doing and he starts kissing down the side of my neck when he answers, “I wanna taste you." (GUH.)
Well then.
One minute I'm laughing and the next I'm all um....well, you know....you've struck a perfect balance here between comedy and sexual tension. I really, really adore this story and can't wait to read your next installment. Now I'm off to another forum I frequent to rave about it so my friends will come and read it. Seriously, you are really good at this.
Author's Response:
"One minute I'm laughing and the next I'm all um....well, you know...."
No, I don't know. Please share with the class... (trying to suppress laughter)...
You raved about my story in another forum? WOW that is awesome. I appreciate the support!
Thank you!
Date: April 22, 2008 02:07 pm Title: World Domination
Oh SNAP! There is some major chemistry goin down in this chapter! I'm loving this story. Looking forward to how Jim reacts to the "challenges" set before him! So amazing, I can't wait for the next chapter!!
Author's Response:
I laughed out loud when I saw "Oh SNAP!"
I'm not going to lie, I love that you love it.
Date: April 22, 2008 01:32 am Title: World Domination
This chapter was beyond awesome!
Author's Response: *blushing* Thank you!
Date: April 21, 2008 10:33 pm Title: World Domination
I was so excited to see another chapter! Loved it! The banter between them is so cute and full of sexual tension. I can't wait to see what happens next. You know something is going to happen when the whole Halpert clan is in Florida and only Jim is home. Perfect opportunities coming up! Update soon!!!!
Author's Response:
I was so excited to see a review! Its fantastic to hear (read) that I'm not the only one diggin this story.
Thank you kindly!
8 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2008 09:04 pm Title: World Domination
"Sometimes he stands just a little too close and stares directly into my eyes just a little longer than is necessary and asks me a question such as, "where's Jon?" or "you seen my dad?""
DUDE - great description of sexy face.
"I'm sorry, I'm just really shocked. This is what my face looks like when I'm in shock."
I did laugh out loud at this. I can see his face perfectly!
Author's Response:
I'm so glad you saw what I was seeing... In my head. I'm really flattered that I made you laugh out loud and thank you for letting me know that I did. I have a huge ego that needs to be fed. Constantly.
I'm lying.
Thank you for liking it!
8 [Report This]Date: April 21, 2008 08:56 pm Title: The Surface of the Sun
The Jon/Pam banter is very good! I really like the premise of this story. I get scared about reading WIP, but it seems like you know where you're going! Good job so far!
Author's Response:
I don't blame you for being scared...I'm a little scared myself! I do know where I'm going, I just hope you like it...
Thank you!