10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2009 10:20 am Title: The Only Chapter
Really great!
Author's Response: Very cool, glad you liked it.
10 [Report This]Date: April 18, 2009 08:46 am Title: The Only Chapter
I almost felt sorry for Pam being sans Jim, then I remember I am always sans Jim, so... yeah, it sucks. But the story rocked. And I would have LOVED an Arrested development reference. Another story, another time, maybe?
Author's Response: I'll keep the Arrested Development references in mind for future stories. Keep your eyes open!
8 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2008 09:09 pm Title: The Only Chapter
Should this not be Fiery New Beesly? :D Yowza. This is smoking hot. Well done. You do a wonderful characterization of Jim and he's not even in the room most of the time.
Loved this bit: “This is America. And if you can’t walk around your own apartment naked, then the terrorists have already won.”
Love how you show Pam gaining a stronger sense of self (totally not a euphamism). Really enjoyed your story. Thanks!
Author's Response: You're right Elle...Fiery New Beesly would have made a better title. I'll get you to title all of my stories from now on. :)
Date: April 26, 2008 08:22 am Title: The Only Chapter
aha! knew it! and the reference would've been: nevernude. this was seriously awesome. well done pam! you really created a very sensual feeling, and something v. evocative. a hot, steamy night. in many ways. this review is getting a little out of control so i'll stop here :)
Author's Response: Best. Review. Ever.
Date: April 26, 2008 07:24 am Title: The Only Chapter
Oops, just read your response to standinginthedoorway's review. Awesome :D
Author's Response: Hey, two reviews are better than one.
Date: April 26, 2008 07:22 am Title: The Only Chapter
That was h-o-t. I love the coming out of her shell Pam Beesly. And you've articulated the point that it's just as important for her to do this alone as when she's with Jim.
Also, what was the AD reference that almost made it in? Dare I think that the lovely Ms. Beesly is a Never Nude?
Author's Response: Good guess! Maybe I should place AD references in all my future stories.
Date: April 25, 2008 06:23 pm Title: The Only Chapter
Nice fic. And I'm curious - what AD reference were you going to add?
Author's Response: Thanks. The AD reference was going to be Tobias and his unfortunate "never-nude" issues (which, for those of you who haven't seen the show, is exactly what it sounds like).rnrnDidn't really fit into the flow of the story. Maybe next time.
8 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2008 04:54 pm Title: The Only Chapter
Love Fancy New Beesly-- she's spicy!!! Great story.
Author's Response: Thank you, dreamscribe. Who doesn't like Fancy New Beesly?
Date: April 25, 2008 04:42 pm Title: The Only Chapter
Fact: Arrested Development is awesome! Fact: so is this story!
Author's Response: Fact: that is a very nice review.
Date: April 25, 2008 04:00 pm Title: The Only Chapter
Beautiful, very descriptive and sensory. Nice work!
--Strider
Author's Response: Thanks a million, Strider. I'm glad you enjoyed it!
10 [Report This]Date: April 25, 2008 03:53 pm Title: The Only Chapter
Wooooooooow... very hot, great first story. I hope you don't have to be prodded to write more!
Author's Response: Thanks...and thanks again for being my first review!