9 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2009 10:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. Very believable. Thanks.
8 [Report This]Date: April 28, 2008 07:35 pm Title: Chapter 1
"Instincts told him that he should do something, but honestly, he was just so shocked that by time he had recovered, Toby had removed his hand and was babbling about Costa Rica and jumping the fence."
I loved that line. Great job on Jim's thoughts of that night.
Date: April 28, 2008 02:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh excellent... this is exactly how Jim and Pam's evening post-Night Out went in my head, so it's nice to see a story about it! I don't know how Jim survived there all those years *without* that sort of happiness to come home to. Thank god he finally has what he deserves! :)
Date: April 28, 2008 10:16 am Title: Chapter 1
It really was a terrible day for them, wasn't it? I think you handled it well here...good insight to Jim's brain.
Date: April 28, 2008 06:15 am Title: Chapter 1
So nice, Jim isn't some dolt. Nice little conversation about Toby. Really sweet.
10 [Report This]Date: April 28, 2008 05:25 am Title: Chapter 1
Such a good job at capturing the mood, Jim's thoughts--everything. Loved it.
9 [Report This]Date: April 27, 2008 10:54 pm Title: Chapter 1
I was actually really hoping someone would write something like this. Loved it, thank you, applause!
Date: April 27, 2008 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
Awww, poor kids. Let's hope this week's episode will be better for them! =)
Date: April 27, 2008 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
Love. it.
Date: April 27, 2008 09:17 pm Title: Chapter 1
what kind of a world do they live in if Michael is right?
That just rocked my socks off. Nicely done antidote to the train wreck that was "Night Out".
Date: April 27, 2008 09:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Yeah, and don't forget Jim also got the "watch your back" remark from Ryan. So yeah, sort of a lose-lose day for him. Thank goodness he's got Pam to keep him steady.
Good job with this.
Date: April 27, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was such a great episode, if a bit hard to watch. So full of frustration! I liked this line in particular:
The kicker was that it turned out after all this time that Michael might be right about Toby, and what Jim really wanted to know was what kind of a world do they live in if Michael is right?
Oh yeah.
Good job!
Date: April 27, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
That was really nice. Jim's right...it WAS a good idea to stay late. He'll get the hang of this management thing. Thanks for such a good story so quickly! --Strider