Date: May 03, 2008 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 2
i can't get enough of this story! i get so sad when i get to the end because i know there's not another chapter. i love how you keep it so close to the show. and i love your writing :] update again soon!
Author's Response: Thanks! I was actually not very happy with this initially because i don't like taking too much straight from the episodes, so I'm glad to hear it worked. Working on ch. 3...
Date: May 03, 2008 09:22 pm Title: Chapter 2
Wow. I'm hanging on to this story as much as I'm hanging on to see what Jim will do!
I hope you are going to let us in on what you have planned for Jim to have planned!
Author's Response: That's the plan...just as soon as I figure it out myself! Thanks for reading :)
8 [Report This]Date: May 03, 2008 06:48 am Title: Chapter 1
this is so cute and charming. i have to say we haven't seen this jim recently, but i hope to see him like this again soon. i miss him. this was so organic and funny - so natural. it really worked for me.
Author's Response: Other than finally getting Pam, Jim hasn't had the best of luck this season has he? Hopefully things will be looking up soon... Thanks for reading and taking the time to comment. :D
Date: May 02, 2008 11:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Man, continue, continue, continue! This was so great! And I'm glad another writer imagines Jim to be an adorable drunk. lol. I wrote a chapter of a story once where he was just giddy with it. I'd LOVE for you to continue this story!
Author's Response: Thanks! I imagine him as either happy/fun/silly or brooding/mopey/morose, but giddy is sure a lot more fun to write, eh? I like a lot of your stuff, LoveFool! Thanks for reading/reviewing :)
9 [Report This]Date: May 02, 2008 09:07 am Title: Chapter 1
So, I'm really glad I decided to give this story a try. I think you've done a really good job of giving us a nice Pam POV here. I like these sort of largely introspective pieces where we can see and hear what a character's thinking throughout the day. And I think your Pam voice, in this case, is very nicely done.
Also, a million extra bonus points for an MST reference! :D
Author's Response: Thanks Mose! I like doing this kind of thing because there's so much more that's left unsaid a lot of the time. And I'm loving how many people remember MST. Nice to know that other people share the same sense of humor as me and my friends. :D
10 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2008 10:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
Continue, continue! I really enjoyed the first chapter. And who knows how long it will take the writers to give us what we want!?
Author's Response: Okay everybody! I have an idea. Unfold kind of beat me to it (see why I wanted to wait for the writers? they're continually surprising me) but my take is a little different, so...let's see what I can come up with instead of working today. Until I'm given a 'formal warning' anyway :D
Date: May 01, 2008 04:12 pm Title: Chapter 1
Please continue! This was so well-written, I can only imagine how the anticipation must be slowly shredding her patience!
Date: May 01, 2008 03:40 pm Title: Chapter 1
Come up with your own way for Jim to do the deed!!!!
Date: May 01, 2008 01:23 pm Title: Chapter 1
Do it, do the deed! So good so far.
Date: May 01, 2008 12:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! I definitely second continuing...this was great.
Author's Response: Thanks! Well, it's snowing out today (after being in the 80's yesterday--gotta love Colorado) so I'm stuck in the house. I guess I'll be working on this all day. Hopefully I'll come up with something good by the weekend.
10 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2008 11:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Awesome vignettes into their personal lives, they really seem to fill in the blanks from what we see very believably (and of course it doesn't hurt that they are fun and written in character). I vote for continuing!
Author's Response: Thanks Jordon! So far the consensus seems to say keep going, so I'm working on it!
Date: May 01, 2008 07:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Uh, I vote for continuing! I really liked this glimpse at a week in the life of Jim and Pam. I think it would be exactly like this. I can't believe Pam didn't look at the ring! That's some self-constraint right there. I hope you continue and I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I love trying to imagine what their interactions and lives are like outside the cameras. will be hard at work on coming up with something appropriately 'kick-ass' today... Thanks for reading!
Date: May 01, 2008 06:58 am Title: Chapter 1
One could never forget MST3K. You really have my curiosity going with this one - fun! Thanks for writing and I really look forward to the next one.
Date: May 01, 2008 06:33 am Title: Chapter 1
I am so gonna marry this man.
Just as soon as he gets around to asking.
Yeah. Winner. Bonus points for MST3K. I'm getting pretty antsy waiting for him to ask, too.
Author's Response: It pleases me that so many people remember MST3K! What is he waiting for? Now I have to try to get in his head and figure it out.
10 [Report This]Date: May 01, 2008 05:47 am Title: Chapter 1
More, please! Callisto, you are fast becoming a favorite. I love everything about this story.
Author's Response: Thanks Nan! I'll see what I can come up with...
Date: April 30, 2008 10:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
PLEASE WRITE MORE! Thank you.
I looooved how you did this in first person. omg it was so great I don't even know where to start just hugs all over it. Drunk!Jim is always great though.
Author's Response: Thanks! I love writing first person!
Date: April 30, 2008 10:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
MST 3000! Yes! Did you ever see Game Over, a scary movie that came out a few years ago? Had Frankie Muniz in it? My friend and I went and gave it the MST 3000 treatment because no one else was there. Good times.
Author's Response: I never saw that movie but yeah, I just loved MST 3000. My favorite of all time was probably the one with Ann-Margret... "Kitten With a Whip." Freaking hilarious.
Date: April 30, 2008 09:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
Cute story! I like the little vignettes of each day.
For the love of god, don't leave the story hanging- 'Jim proposes' stories don't get old.
Author's Response: Thanks! I don't have any ideas yet on how he's gonna do it, but I'll take a crack at it.