Date: July 27, 2008 11:07 pm Title: Chapter 11
Sigh.
I am happy.
10 [Report This]Date: July 27, 2008 10:10 pm Title: Chapter 11
brilliant - absolutely brilliant. This might be the best chapter in the whole story (almost typed book...). This has been a pleasure to read :) thank you
Date: July 26, 2008 07:42 am Title: Chapter 1
At first I wasn't sure how I felt about this fic but you totally sucked me in. I love the darker tone of it and th dramatic nature of it, especially in later chapters. I wish it didn't have to end :( I kind of wish the JAM reunion was a bit more drawn out but I still love this.
Date: July 21, 2008 02:18 pm Title: Chapter 10
Beautiful. I love that he knows that she brought him back to being the man he used to be, and acknowledges how lost he was without her.
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2008 11:47 am Title: Chapter 10
Oh man. You've had me in tears since the beginning, I loved your story, you're a fantastic writer, you're so damn good, this story is so damn good, I feel like I"ve watched a movie that I'll daydream about for the next week. Seriously. This deserves a medal. You're awesome. This story is awesome. Jim and Pam are awesome.
Date: July 21, 2008 07:29 am Title: Chapter 10
Ah, well-deserved happiness. Nicely done, Strawberry Fields. Bravo!
Date: July 21, 2008 06:47 am Title: Chapter 10
This story has been so great, I really like it alot and can't wait to read your epilogue, really great writing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I hope you enjoy the epilogue!
9 [Report This]Date: July 20, 2008 11:21 pm Title: Chapter 10
Wow. So, um, my fantasy JAM proposal has always been him waking her up with it in bed... way to hit the nail on the head? Haha, seriously... I love you for that.
This was beautiful.
Author's Response: You know, I was going to go for something way more dramatic, but it just kind of tumbled out while I was writing and I went with it! So I'm really glad you liked that proposal. I think it works for them! I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 20, 2008 10:29 pm Title: Chapter 10
I approve of that ending :)
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!
9 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2008 03:13 pm Title: Chapter 9
I seriously love this. I don't even know what else to say about it that I hadn't already- but, I believe it. And I appreciate the risks you're taking with it- its different, in a very good way.
Date: July 09, 2008 04:01 pm Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait to read the end. California Pam? Wow.
Author's Response: California Pam is a little more brave! I'm glad you've enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: July 08, 2008 04:52 pm Title: Chapter 9
Once again, so hauntingly beautiful and so realistic. My favorite fanfic in a long, long time. I don't want this to end but I know you're drawing it near. You've done a fantastic job! Just awesome!
Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you've enjoyed it! Thanks for reviewing...it means so much to me!
Date: July 07, 2008 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 1
I just wanted to let you know that this story has developed into my favorite Jim/Pam fic of all I've read. It's gorgeous, and I'm so enthralled by each chapter that I don't even notice the time pass by as I read it. I'm disappointed it will be ending after just one more chapter, but I look forward to reading whatever else you put out in the future.
Great job, really.
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2008 07:15 pm Title: Chapter 9
Great chapter! I just got caught up with this story and absolutely love it. I've been getting really tired of reading stories where Pam and Jim just fall into each others' arms and live happily ever after. It's not that I don't want them to eventually be happy, but it is just not realistic for it to happen so quickly. So basically, what I'm trying to say is that I really like what you did with this chapter. It was well-written, heartbreaking and sweet all at the same time. I hope you update soon :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! I know sometimes the angst is hard to handle, and we all want a little fluff, so I'm glad you've enjoyed the departure from that and a trip into angst territory. Thanks so much for taking the time to review. I hope you'll enjoy the rest of the story.
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2008 06:11 pm Title: Chapter 9
I didn't see the "one more chapter" but I thought that, while unsatisfying JAMa wise, it'd be a good ending story wise. I may have just contradicted myself, but whatevs.
This story has made me CRY like a baby, but it's so beautiful that it's so worth the angst.
I am beyond psyched for the next chapter. :)
Author's Response: I was oh-so-tempted to leave it there, but I can't handle a story without a happy ending no matter how dark! I'm glad you liked this chapter, and I hope you'll find the real ending satisfactory! Thanks for taking the time to review.
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2008 05:51 pm Title: Chapter 9
God...that was absolutely devastating and unbelievably good. I could cry. There would be no more memories to add to the teapot. Whew. So sad.
10 [Report This]Date: July 07, 2008 05:27 pm Title: Chapter 9
wow!
that brought tears to my eyes.
amazing - im definitely looking forward to more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Dwangie! I hope you enjoy the rest of the story!
Date: July 07, 2008 04:48 pm Title: Chapter 9
What a wonderful dramatic heartbreaking chapter. I love how strong, yet vulnerable, Pam is in this chapter. She is making Jim work for her love and respect. This story has just broken my heart -- but in a good way.
Author's Response: Thank you, Alamos! I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter. It was very difficult to write when my Jammy heart just wanted them to be together! Thanks for taking the time to review!
9 [Report This]Date: July 03, 2008 08:29 am Title: Chapter 8
Whew. I'm drained. Just read this and the prior chapter. So intense and painful to read, but so very good. I'm relieved that there's a light at the end of the tunnel. Excellent, excellent job, Strawberry Fields.
Author's Response: Thank you! And thank you for being such a consistent reviewer! I'm so glad you've enjoyed this story!
9 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2008 10:17 pm Title: Chapter 8
You know, I really appreciate that they didn't immediately start making out and having sex on the couch or something. This was really refreshing and how I definitely would see Pam react. Its still hopeful. Once again, I'm incredibly anxious to see what happensss.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked that! It was very tempting to make their reunion fluffy, but I had a feeling it wouldn't work for this story! Sorry I'm responding to this so late, but thanks for taking the time to review! I really appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 29, 2008 07:21 pm Title: Chapter 8
It's so nice to have things start to swing up from the deep, dark depths you took us. And of course it's not all puppies and rainbows, but who wants that? I love the depth and pathos of this story. I just feel so much when reading it. Thanks so much for creating and sharing.
Author's Response: Thank YOU for sharing your thoughts! I really appreciate it...even if it takes me a while to respond to the reviews! (I'm moving across country...what a pain!) I'm glad you enjoyed the darkness of this story, and I hope you'll enjoy it as it heads to fluffville!
Date: June 29, 2008 06:36 pm Title: Chapter 8
Ahhh. Thank you!! Some light after all that too-real darkness. Beautifully done, just pitch-perfect. Bravo!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I'm glad you enjoyed!
Date: June 29, 2008 06:22 pm Title: Chapter 8
Yay! Thanks for the nice long chapter -- I really liked the exchange between Matthew & Jim in this one.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you enjoyed their dynamic...they've been fun to write! Sorry this took me like, 8 years to respond to! Moving across country is a pain!
10 [Report This]Date: June 28, 2008 07:19 pm Title: Chapter 7
Fantastic chapter. You write so well. the angst was absolutely amazing. I can't wait to read more :)
Author's Response: Thank you! And thanks for taking the time to review. I really appreciate it! More coming soon!
Date: June 24, 2008 09:11 am Title: Chapter 1
I am absolutely in love with this story. Like any JAM fan, I love the fluffy, so-in-love stories. But this one is so real and so amazingly written that I was sucked in on just the first line in the first chapter.
I've been lurking here for 8 months or so, but I had to join just to post a review. You are an amazing writer and I'm on the edge of my seat waiting for the next chapter. I'm glad things finally seem to be looking up for our poor Jim.