Date: February 16, 2018 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very nice. I especially liked "a new smile he noticed the very first night they had gone to dinner. That smile was something she never had given him before, and he had almost rarely had he seen it while she was with Roy. In that smile, he knew she was completely, blissfully happy to be with him."
I loved how Pam smiled at Jim in Fun Run. Not only was she completely happy and in love, but she also looked at Jim with a sense of wonder and anticipation, like 'I wonder what amazing thing he's going to do next? I can't wait for it to happen, whatever it is!' It was definitely a completely new smile.
10 [Report This]Date: April 22, 2010 04:40 am Title: Chapter 1
Only 4 out of the last 7- seems suspisciously low :)
Dan is an Imbecile.
Invincible Jim is the best :)
He wants a ring as perfect as her??? How much cuter can this get? (Great writing there by the way)
Like Pam said in Golden Ticket, Assertiveness is Hot!
Complete bliss at the thought of a lifetime commitment, is it any wonder we love with this man?
Don't lose confidence, she'll say Yes!
Best Impulse Buy Ever.
So sweet I think I'm getting a sugar rush! A wonderful piece of writing, can't wait to see more!
10 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2008 08:51 am Title: Chapter 1
Yeah! I loved this story. There were great undertones of Jim in it everywhere. Very romantic. I found this story after reading your wedding story. will there be more wedding chapters? A honeymoon?
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, there are two more chapters of the wedding story, and they should be coming soon (that's what she said). I should post the next one soon, so be on the lookout!
Date: May 11, 2008 08:12 am Title: Chapter 1
I really love the last sentence. This was sweet.
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you liked it.
9 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2008 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute story! I can so totally see that happening. Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it!
9 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2008 07:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ah, love me some fluff. Great story. I like the image of Jim, dressed for basketball, impulsively buying this ring in a little downtown shop. So sweet. Nice job.
Author's Response: Thank you! You're my first reviewer on this site! I feel like you should get a prize or something... Glad you liked it, and keep an eye out for more!