Date: July 21, 2008 10:56 pm Title: Fun and Games
Good Job I love Creed in this story!
Date: July 21, 2008 10:44 pm Title: Sentiments and Promises
Creed sat in the back playing a Gameboy. lol great detail!
Author's Response: Thank you! So glad you enjoyed those little extra touches. (twss)
10 [Report This]Date: June 03, 2008 08:37 am Title: The Send Off
I loved it! Sad it's over though. I hope you wirte something else soon. Your story was by far one of the best lovely fluffy stories I have read on MTT.
The Dwight contract twist at the end was great. I love that Jim is going to protect Pam's sandcastles from the waves too. Uber-sweet! Thanks for writting it. And thanks for reading After the fireworks. I will continue to post 1-2 chapters per week I hope you'll continue read it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I know, it's just like when a real episode is over and I'm sad, lol. I will definitely continue to write more, and read After the Fireworks. Thanks again for the lovely reviews!!
Date: June 03, 2008 07:27 am Title: Guarding The Door
I loved this on FF.net and I love it now.
Author's Response: Thanks much! Glad you enjoyed it.
Date: June 01, 2008 11:12 am Title: Fun and Games
I must say I really want to see this be made since it is just like the show! All the talking heads I could imagine so perfectly and everything just fit so well with the show! Please please write more!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! That is so nice to hear. There's one chapter left, so be on the lookout for it!
10 [Report This]Date: June 01, 2008 11:08 am Title: Fun and Games
I love this wedding story so much. I'm so glad there was another chapter. Will there be a honeymoon? please say yes!
1)Still can't get the funny line: "he's 6'2 and put on your pants" out of my head. loved it.
2)Anyone who puts a Creed line in their story is a personal hero to me. I love Creed. Though it isn't escential to your plot more Creed if possible.
3)The cake scene was so perfect!
4)Ben fold's song? was that one of his solo hits? I'm unfamilar. I'll have to look it up. I was a big fan when he was part of the five (3) you know what I mean.
5)Garter flirting was adorable.
6)Kudos for the Dwangela hook-up. I appreciated the boldness of Angela's confession. I think Andy would have been more pissed but why ruin such a lovely wedding with a brawl.
6)Love it Love it Love it. Please keep writing more.
P.S. I'm posting my next fireworks chapter monday, hope to hear from you.
Author's Response: Thanks Jewelsy! I'm really enjoying hearing from you. Unfortunately there's only one more chapter left, and it's more like a tag than anything else. We do get a glimpse of their honeymoon though! And that Ben Folds song is one of his solo hits; I would definitely look it up. I'm glad you saw the logic of Andy trying to save face at the reception; considering the reputation he has, I thought it would just be better for him to try and laugh it off instead. Maybe that was a technique he learned in anger management? Thank you so much for reviewing; I'll look for another chapter of your story on Monday!!
Date: May 31, 2008 02:38 pm Title: Fun and Games
Channeling a little "Love Actually" there! Love it :)
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you caught that reference!
Date: May 29, 2008 07:58 am Title: Dinner Time
i am absolutely enjoying this story! i check back every day to see if you update it, and im happy to see it being updated it fairly quickly. i love the personal touches you put on the wedding, their my favorite part. the jelly beans, the ham sandwiches...awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I enjoy the personal touches too; I imagine their wedding would be full of them because they are both so sentimental. The next chapter is my favorite, so be on the lookout for it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 08:07 pm Title: Dinner Time
MAWWAGE!
I... sort of? loved Michael's speech. Loved Jim's vows more. =] My favorite part, I would have to say, was Pam explaining her something old, her something new, her something borrowed, & her something blue. I can't wait for the next chapter. Please don't give up on this story!
Author's Response: I know nothing can beat his speech in Phyllis' Wedding, but at least I gave it the ol' college try. I love that the 'something old, something new' explanation was your favorite part! If you liked the yogurt lid reference, you will definitely enjoy some things in the next chapter. Don't worry, I ain't givin' up yet!
Date: May 28, 2008 04:31 pm Title: Dinner Time
your story is one I constantly check up on since it just seems so real! I love how you got Michael's speech to be cringe worthy but not so much that I want to run and hide. Also I have to add that you have the best JAM moments since you stay true to the characters and their quirks instead of just going off and seeming to reinvent them. Please keep up this work! I love love love this story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! Yeah the fact that I wrote it in episode style I think really helped me keep everyone in-character, and so I'm glad you think that decision paid off! The next chapter is my favorite, so be on the lookout for it soon!
10 [Report This]Date: May 28, 2008 04:05 pm Title: Dinner Time
Loved it! So right on for the office personalities. Stanley and the crossword puzzle: brilliant! I know it's disapointing not to get reviews. This is a really good in character piece of fan fiction. Don't be dismayed I loved it and I'm sure so many others did as well. I wrote one (After the fireworks, in progress) if you care to read it and leave feedback for me I'd appreciate it.
Author's Response: Thank you! That's encouraging to hear, cause I got a lot more reviews for this story on the other site I post on. I will definitely go and read your story! I'm still trying to sift my way through the most popular stories on this site, but I should remember to also check out ones written by my own reviewers! *Smacks forehead* Thanks again; glad you're enjoying it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 22, 2008 10:58 am Title: Sentiments and Promises
Absolutley beautiful and funny. I loved it. "He's 6'1 and put on your pants" hillarious! Kevein taking bets? Are you kidding me? Really good job. Very true to The Office style.
Author's Response: Thank you! That is one of my favorite lines too. Glad you're enjoying it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 21, 2008 11:05 am Title: Sentiments and Promises
Oh, this chapter was so good! I have to admit, I am usually on the bandwagon of we don't have to really see their wedding for me to be satisfied, but after reading this, I would love to see them finally get married. This is exactly how I would picture a Jim and Pam wedding, complete with Dwight as some sort of guard with a contract. Excellent story so far, Dundie All-Star. Please keep it coming!
Author's Response: Thank you! I feel that way too, actually; in fact, I would love if we came back in season 5 and they were already engaged or something. I'm really glad you're enjoying this though, and if we do get to see their wedding I hope it'll have some humorous elements in it, like Dwight as a bodyguard. Be on the lookout for more; there's three more chapters to go!
10 [Report This]Date: May 17, 2008 03:42 pm Title: Guarding The Door
This is so great! Update soon please!
Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter is on its way soon!
8 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2008 06:49 am Title: Contracts
Hahaha! I love it! It really felt like an office episode. Is there more?
Author's Response: Thank you! There definitely is more, so keep an eye out!
Date: May 10, 2008 08:34 pm Title: Guarding The Door
Excellent!! You had me laughing so many times. Gotta love Dwight and his Nazi family. And Michael desperately trying to fit himself into the wedding. I really like the jellybean theme. Based on his performance in Safety Training, I bet Kevin guesses around 200.
Author's Response: LOL Thank you! Originally I didn't write in anything about Kevin's guess, but I might now! And yes, you will soon see how desperate Michael is to get in on the wedding festivities. Glad you liked it!
Date: May 10, 2008 11:08 am Title: Guarding The Door
love it already...I really like how you add in little "Office details" like Dwight being in the background, or the sly smiles...very well done!
Author's Response: Thanks! Yeah those are what really make it feel like an episode. Glad you liked it!
Date: May 10, 2008 09:01 am Title: Guarding The Door
I read this over on FF and you definitely need to post the whole thing...it's great! Dwight as guard dog is hilarious.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'll have more chapters up soon. Didn't realize so many people visited both sites... Oh well. Thanks again!
Date: May 10, 2008 07:39 am Title: Guarding The Door
I think I've read this story before. Still good this time around.
Author's Response: Lol, that's a possibility of you frequent FanFiction.net. Thanks for the review anyway!