Date: May 12, 2008 11:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
Once again our little Caity churns out a pretty, angst-filled, story that makes me choke up and want to hug you. I loved the bit about the "recycled" wedding. GUH, SO PRETTY. I can't wait for the next part!!!
Author's Response: **hugs** loves youu
10 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2008 01:51 pm Title: Chapter 1
flonkerton--I really enjoyed reading this in all its iterations, but this final copy is simply lovely. It's a really fun twist on the "Phyllis' Wedding" we all probably wanted to see. You did such a great job exploring Pam's relationships with both men in her life, and I always enjoy a story that looks at the whole picture of her time with Roy, rather than just pigeon-holing him as an abusive lout or anything like that. Bravo!
-CH
Author's Response: Welll thanks for all the help with the early drafts, they were really helpful b29;
Date: May 11, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was amazing -- really, really a great job. I love what you did with this!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot!
10 [Report This]Date: May 11, 2008 07:10 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was FANTASTIC!!
So many wonderful lines but these really stood out:
"She cries for Jim, the man she turned down right before she needed him most"
"But maybe this wedding was meant for them all along."
So beautiful. Great writing!
Author's Response: Thank youuu!