10 [Report This]Date: November 07, 2009 10:22 am Title: one
This is such a great story! The title is so fitting for story and I loved how you wrote the five senses into moments between Jim and Pam. It's cute, tender, sweet, and...well...sensual at the same time. It's hard to decide which one I like the most since each is special in its own way.
Thanks for writing this!
9 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2008 03:17 pm Title: one
This has a really beautiful simplicity about it that makes it totally Jim and Pam. Good job!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I guess I'm a little Thoreau - "Simplicity, simplicity, simplicity!" *laughs*
9 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2008 07:59 pm Title: one
Very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: May 12, 2008 06:55 pm Title: one
mmm... just lovely. I especially like how their hands just fit together and how the taste of him leaves her craving more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: May 12, 2008 02:07 pm Title: one
So sweet! Nice work.
Author's Response: Thank you!