9 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2009 04:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
That line from Emily Dickinson's poem is simply beautiful. And your story, using that one line to write about the five different mornings with Jim and Pam was very well done. The moments you wrote about were the normal,everyday moments shared by couples and yet, there's just something so heartwarming that Jim and Pam get to share it now. My favorite was probably when she woke up with the urge to draw him. But the others were equally just as good. Great job!
...and the steeples swam in amethyst... ::sigh:: I love this poem.
Date: May 13, 2008 03:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so beautiful...great job!
Author's Response: Thank you very much!
Date: May 12, 2008 12:00 pm Title: Chapter 1
The writing here is truly gorgeous. You set such a lovely (and different) atmosphere in each. Sensual, rushed, leisurely,... Loved it. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much!
10 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2008 07:28 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely and poetic. #3 especially made my heart melt :)
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I like that one in particular, too.
10 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2008 07:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Simply gorgeous, kasuchi.
Author's Response: Thank you kindly, NanReg.