10 [Report This]Date: May 27, 2008 04:32 pm Title: Candy and Beer
Tuna Von Halpert is the greatest most Andy thing ever.
Mad props.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad that you liked it. Picturing it in my head it sounded so much like Andy that I knew I had to include it. Thank you for taking the time to review thatswhatshesaid!
8 [Report This]Date: May 26, 2008 05:33 pm Title: Candy and Beer
This was so cute! I loved Pam's explanation of Michael's candy bar references - and Jim's imagining the conversation where he asked her parents for her hand was terrific! Great job.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the candy bar references, that was the last thing I added into the story, so I'm happy that you liked it. Thanks for the review kaystar, I appreciate it!
8 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2008 07:52 pm Title: Candy and Beer
Aaaw, this was sweet! I love it. I really loved Andy's lines, especially turning Netflix into a verb, it's a very Andyish kind of thing to do. Great writing.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked that line. I personally have a bit of a habit of doing that as well, which I guess makes me slightly Andyish.....which is kind of yikes. Anyway, thanks for the review TeamPammy, I appreciate you taking the time.
10 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2008 05:06 pm Title: Candy and Beer
Loved it, loved it, loved it!! That was so sweet. You should continue with it. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words and review SpunkyAR. I had originally planned to make it longer (TWSS) but I just didn't have the time and didn't want to leave anyone hanging.
Date: May 13, 2008 04:28 pm Title: Candy and Beer
cute story...love the inner thoughts based on what was happening...
Author's Response: Thanks, I like to write stories where you literally get inside the heads of the characters, for me that's kind of what fic is all about. I appreciate the kind words and review dancer288.
10 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2008 06:39 am Title: Candy and Beer
Dang. It's over. I was hoping there was more. I was so enjoying this read. Excellent dialog. IMHO, you captured everyone's voices perfectly. There are just too many fine lines to quote. Suffice it to say that I truly enjoyed them all. Great work, dundiefromgod!
Author's Response: Thanks NanReg (and for the review as well). I had actually intended to make this a two-parter, but knew that I didn't have the time to write a second chapter, so instead of WIPing it, I just marked it completed.
Date: May 13, 2008 06:30 am Title: Candy and Beer
I love Jim! You have all these characters down perfectly; you could write for the show. Great story.
Author's Response: Thanks so much Keds. What a really nice review. I'm glad that you liked the characterization in the story.
10 [Report This]Date: May 12, 2008 09:25 pm Title: Candy and Beer
Very cute story! I loved it Jim's idea of Pam's parents rejecting him...
Author's Response: Thank you for the review Ellie. I'm glad that you liked the idea of Pam's parents rejecting him, I think its amusing to wonder about Jim's insecurities about his job and how they'd translate into similar ones with her parents.