10 [Report This]Date: May 14, 2008 12:44 pm Title: I got two sets of headphones, I miss you like hell.
Gorgeous, flawless from beginning to end. There were so many real emotions, so many raw emotions... that were just there. And the final scene... about people being so ridiculously stupid... Perfect. Great job.
Author's Response: Ah! Thank you so much!! What a great review to get, seriously :)
Date: May 13, 2008 10:00 pm Title: I got two sets of headphones, I miss you like hell.
WTF?? Haha. I'm sorry, were YOU on crack when you wrote this? No, really, it's very interesting. You have a lot of creativity.
Author's Response: Um... thanks? I think?
Date: May 13, 2008 03:39 pm Title: I got two sets of headphones, I miss you like hell.
all good now. and i'd just like to reiterate...seriously, awesome story. the joaquin phoenix rehabilitation center and jim playing ryan's game with suggesting the drug testing to wallace jim and pam having a fight that is totally a big deal to both of them but kind of looks funny from an objective standpoint and michael being kind of sort of cool but still michael. I loved all of it.
Author's Response: Thank you!! <3 I'm really glad you liked it!
Date: May 13, 2008 03:01 pm Title: I got two sets of headphones, I miss you like hell.
OK...
HOLY HELL!
that was different...AU to the max...The story line was so far from what i have been reading, it took me a minute, but i do like it. Kinda HOT too!!....yep, it was hotty HOT!
Me thinks me likey and want more!! I want to understand the title though, can ya help a sister out?
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm glad you liked it, even if it's not what you usually read :) I actually have a follow-up story I'm working on (it was going to be part of this one, but it would have been waay too long, haha). The title is just a line from a song and I thought it sounded fitting? Like, they're both ending up somewhere they hadn't expected to?
Date: May 13, 2008 02:20 pm Title: I got two sets of headphones, I miss you like hell.
i loved it. one thing, something wonky happened with the formatting towards the end. It all ended up in a block of text? Maybe that's what you were going for, but it got a little hard to read with the dialogue and everything all in there together. Seriously though, really great stuff.
Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know! The formatting definitely got screwed up when I first posted it, so I tried taking it down and trying again, so it looks okay (at least on my screen?) now? If it's still messed up for you please let me know! And I'm so glad you liked it, thank you!!
9 [Report This]Date: May 13, 2008 02:18 pm Title: I got two sets of headphones, I miss you like hell.
Wow. This type of story isn't normally my cup of tea. Despite feeling extremely uncomfortable right now, I have to say that this is a great fic, one of the most original I've read. You managed to cover untraveled territory in a truly believable way and keep me, a die-hard JAM fan, throroughly engrossed. Excellent work.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm really glad that you found it a good read, even if it isn't normally your kind of thing. Thanks for the comment!