Date: May 16, 2008 09:04 pm Title: Tuna!
Oh, Moxie. I am still licking my wounds from last night. Your story is good medicine.
Can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Good medicine = one part Jammy schmoopiness + one part vicodin. :-)
Thanks for taking the time and reviewing, Beeswax - you rock! More coming soon!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 08:51 pm Title: Tuna!
Once again, you knocked it out of the park, Moxie. This felt so real, much more so than the finale did. I loved how Pam's final line ties into the episode title.
Author's Response:
*blush* thanks, Larry! Hope the next chapter makes you as happy. :-)
Date: May 16, 2008 08:45 pm Title: Tuna!
Since the finale yanked my chain so hard to where I no longer care about the show, I applaud you writing what SHOULD have happened. Thank you Mox for this.
Author's Response: Anytime, realitycheck!!! Hope the bruises from the chain-yanking are starting to heal. :-)
Date: May 16, 2008 08:13 pm Title: Tuna!
I ::heart:: Moxie.
Author's Response:
Awww.... I ::heart:: awesome reviewers like Aurorabee! (adorable username!) Thanks!!!!
Date: May 16, 2008 06:52 pm Title: Tuna!
Ok, can I just say, that we should fire GD and make you the new show runner of The Office, because your take on last night, is infinitely better. I loved how you were able to convey both Jim and Pam's disappointment at the thwarted proposal, and how Pam clearly recognized why Jim was upset. I also particularly liked the part where the single tear runs down Pam's cheek and it's seeing that that causes Jim to unravel. Just perfect. Please update soon! Give the readers what they want! P.S. AWESOME title
Author's Response: You get the Dundie for most awesome fanfic reviewer! :-) I appreciate the comments, even if GD might still be slightly more qualified for the job. Maybe he'd let me sit in the corner and just feed him comments? Thanks so much!!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 06:38 pm Title: Tuna!
Please tell me you're updating soon!
Author's Response: Absolutely I am! Check back tomorrow! Thanks for the comment, Ellie!
Date: May 16, 2008 05:09 pm Title: Tuna!
“Please just ask me,”
I KNOW, RIGHT! That moment as you wrote it was super sweet.
Also, your title makes me super smile.
Author's Response: Everything I said below x 2 = Thanks!!! :-)
Date: May 16, 2008 05:08 pm Title: Tuna!
“Please just ask me,”
I KNOW, RIGHT! That moment as you wrote it was super sweet.
Author's Response: Right! I couldn't get that image out of my head, so I made it a fanfic - so glad you liked it! Thanks for reviewing - Comments make me very happy!! Part 2 should be up tomorrow.
Date: May 16, 2008 04:46 pm Title: Tuna!
Thank you a million times over for writing this! Lovin' everything about it.
Author's Response: You are more than welcome, Post_it_Thief! I think we all needed some Jamminess to make up for being so denied! More coming soon, I think/hope! You're awesome for taking the time to review!!
Date: May 16, 2008 03:45 pm Title: Tuna!
We all WISH it happened this way...I am not feeling the love for Greg Daniels right now, ya know?!!!
Wonderfull as always-I will be waiting for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Hopefully the next chapter will be coming very soon (why does real life have to interrupt my Office life???) - Thanks so much for reviewing, JF4K - I truly appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 03:12 pm Title: Tuna!
lovin' it :) Toby went the way of Jan in my opinion - normal to creepy weird. Also, the roof has always been my ideal spot for a Jim proposal
Author's Response:
Thanks, untherapy - I don't know why Toby had to end up the way he did. All I can keep thinking about was "he used to let Jim watch Sasha and now he's trying to steal his girl?? What's up with that??!" And I totally agree about the rooftop. That's *their* place. Thanks so much for reviewing!
9 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Tuna!
My dearest, darling Moxie. I would be much, much happier today if you were at the helm last night. Thank you for this. Can't wait to see where you take it.
Author's Response: If this made you happy - then my work is done. :-) So glad you're enjoying it, Nan - more soon!
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 03:10 pm Title: Tuna!
If I wish long and hard enough, can this become what actually happened?
Seriously, you're amazing mox! The finale's had me down all day, and this just made it all better. Can't wait to see how you finish it off! -Spencer
Author's Response: Just click your red shoes three times, and it will all be true. ;-) Thanks for the review, Spencer! I really love hearing from you. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: May 16, 2008 03:06 pm Title: Tuna!
Moxie!!!! Finally. Someone to get this right!!! Love you, love you, love you for doing this!!
Author's Response: How awesome are you, Stilla? VERY!! Thanks for such a sweet review - so glad you liked it! (More to come soon!)
Date: May 16, 2008 03:04 pm Title: Tuna!
I thought you were going to cheat out of a proposal (but then I checked to see this isn't finished yet, YAY!) I liked them being sweet in the back, Jim hugging her because he made he cry, Pam telling him just to do it. Very nice.
Author's Response: Thanks, flamingo! I actually wasn't planning on writing anything about it, but the demons took over and wouldn't rest. :-) Part 2 should be up by tomorrow - stay tuned! Thanks for reviewing!!