Date: June 07, 2008 08:44 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen
Speechless *sob*
Author's Response: There, there. It'll get better.
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 08:36 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen
No garbage ilif. I want Jim and Pam together but not while she's still married to Roy. Not in keeping with who I think Pam is I guess.
Love this story to bits and thanks for updating so regularly.
Author's Response: Glad you're liking it. :) And I guess updates have become my speciality haha.
Date: June 07, 2008 08:21 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
I really feel for both of them. It's so heartbreaking. Someone is going to have to crack and spill their guts soon.
Author's Response: The cracking will happen, guts shall be spilled. They just need to get over themselves first.
Date: June 07, 2008 07:43 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen
Just take off the heavy ring already!
Seriously, another fine chapter!
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: June 07, 2008 07:00 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen
Thanks again for the quick updates. You are great! Garbage??? OMG, NO. This is such a beautifully written, poignant chapter. Made my heart break for Jim and for Pam. I can picture them standing at the sink staring into each others' eyes as Pam longs for things to be different....and Jim aches for a chance to be with her. More soon, PLEASE!!!
Author's Response: Well I'm glad the angsty angst didn't inspire garbage throwing and I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I can definitely promise more soon. :)
Date: June 07, 2008 06:51 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen
Whoa, poor, poor Jim! Pam just do the right thing here already!! I'm totally hooked on this story, and I seriously can't wait till you update the next chapter! I do love the angst, but I'm also really looking forward to some serious fluff! Great job once again!
Author's Response: The fluff will happen at some point. I would be a monster otherwise, I think. ;)
Date: June 07, 2008 06:46 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen
Ugh, that was heartbreaking. But so, so good!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, despite its heartbreakingness. :)
Date: June 06, 2008 06:56 pm Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
Lisahoo is right! Extra points for that sweet Charlie Brown reference! You can just feel the tension mounting in this story. I can't wait for the volcano of emotions to erupt!!!
Author's Response: The volcano blows its top eventually. And, if I may say so (and I may be biased), I think it's a pretty big explosion. I hope so anyway! :)
Date: June 06, 2008 12:38 pm Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
ooo the other stuff. I can't wait
Author's Response: The other stuff will be up soon. :)
Date: June 06, 2008 12:18 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
Wow, I miss an update somehow. Thanks for getting them out so fast. This story has quickly become my favorite. I feel for both of them.
Author's Response: Timely updates are always a good thing. :) I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Date: June 06, 2008 10:37 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
okay, this is more agonizing than booze cruise was. He always has so many openings but just refuses to go there. You're staying very true to character (although I wish that Pam will start using some of her braveness that she must have learned from Maddie by now!)
I'm eager for more!
Author's Response: More soon. You can hold me to that. Pam's a little slow with the braveness, but she'll get there.
Date: June 06, 2008 10:26 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
Hurry, Hurry!! Do we get any of Pam's POV?
Author's Response: A little Pam POV happens in the next chapter. She has her fair share of angsty thoughts as well.
Date: June 06, 2008 10:24 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
Oooo! "Other stuff!" Squeeeeee!
Author's Response: The other stuff is big stuff, trust me.
Date: June 06, 2008 10:18 am Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
aww, points for quoting Charlie Brown ;o)
Just don't let Pam pull the football away as he's running up to kick it.
Author's Response: Jim fares a little better than Charlie Brown.
Date: June 06, 2008 07:52 am Title: i wanna know your plans, and how involved in them i am
Oh, poor Doug! He's a Jim-in-training. I love the image of Jim on the front steps and all the details surround it--very nicely portrayed.
Author's Response: Thank you. That chapter was a sort of last minute idea, so I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: June 06, 2008 06:44 am Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?
Ahhhh! This chapter is soooo great! I loved it! Very well done. This story makes me very happy!
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm really happy people are enjoying reading it as much as I enjoyed writing it.
Date: June 06, 2008 01:58 am Title: i wanna know your plans, and how involved in them i am
Jim. JIM is your type, Beesly. Jim is EVERYBODY'S type.
Author's Response: He is indeed.
Date: June 06, 2008 01:54 am Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?
That Maddie is a sharp one.
Author's Response: She knows what's going on. And thankfully she isn't shy about it.
Date: June 06, 2008 01:51 am Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?
Aww. Angst makes me sad, but it's gotta be there! Plus, it helps when it's written so well. ;)
Author's Response: And for me this is like Angst Lite, same great taste, fewer tears. I'm glad you like it. :)
Date: June 06, 2008 01:49 am Title: i'll be your mirror, reflect what you are in case you don't know
"It's Disneyland though, isn't it? I figured it out, so now you have to pretend it's not."
I love Jim. Even if this is an even more fictional version of him. Still, I love how you write him. :D
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I'm also partial to Jim. He's niiiiice.
Date: June 06, 2008 01:46 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
Aww, fluff, fluff, fluff, the world runs on fluff!
a. I love All I Want is You
b. What is the first scene from Jaws?
c. Maddie had good taste. ;]
Author's Response: To answer B: In the first scene of Jaws, two people go skinny dipping in the ocean and one of them is eaten by a shark. So... not fun.
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 08:07 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
I haven't reviewed this story in a while... But it's not because I don't love it, there have just been so many updates! And that is a very good thing. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Updates are indeed good and I'm glad you like them. :)
Date: June 05, 2008 06:50 pm Title: i wanna know your plans, and how involved in them i am
aw cute
Author's Response: Thank you. :) I try.
Date: June 05, 2008 06:48 pm Title: i wanna know your plans, and how involved in them i am
Oh, Miss Pam. So much time spent away from Doofus Roy. Let me guess, he brought the jet-skis to California?
Author's Response: He probably did. Now I'm a little sad that I didn't add in Pam showing Jim the garage and saying "This is where the jet-skis would go if Roy hadn't taken them on his work trip." haha.
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 04:18 pm Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?
I just got caught up on this story and wow! It's great. The dynamic between them is so perfect here and I can't wait to read more! Update soon!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it. And updates will remain lightning fast, I promise. :)