8 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 04:07 pm Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?
Another fab chapter! You teased us with the smudge on the forehead - i thought more would come of that!!
Author's Response: I am a tease. I can't help it. I hope the ending leaves everybody satisfied and smiling.
Date: June 05, 2008 02:41 pm Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?
Oh, these little short chapters are such teasers!! Thank goodness you're updating with lightning speed 'cause I don't think I could otherwise breathe! :)
Author's Response: I like to make sure that my readers make it out alive.
Date: June 05, 2008 02:34 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
Another fast update! That was a great chapter. I am really loving Maddie. She is one smart cookie!
Author's Response: It seems like everyone but Jim and Pam knows what's going on. They're slow, like Kevin. :b
Date: June 05, 2008 12:23 pm Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?
another great chapter
Author's Response: Why thank you very much. :)
Date: June 05, 2008 12:18 pm Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?
First off, love that song. It's been stuck in my head all day and then you go and name a chapter after it. I don't think it will be leaving any time soon : ) This chapter gave me butterflies. I loved the tension during the "icing interlude" and then Maddie and Jim's interaction. Really sweet.
Author's Response: It's such a great song. The whole album is fantastic really. Not a bad thing to have stuck in your head. And I will now forever refer to that bit as the "icing interlude." Fantastic. I'm glad you liked it. :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 11:58 am Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?
I really like where this story is going. I get really excited when I see you've updated.
Author's Response: Yay for being excited. :) I'm glad you're liking it.
Date: June 05, 2008 11:56 am Title: should i give up, or should i just keep chasing pavements?
Just kiss already!!
Author's Response: If only it were so simple... (which, technically it could be, but I just can't resist angst).
Date: June 05, 2008 07:19 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
I'm getting anxious for some serious talking. I think it's time for them to get into it!
Author's Response: They'll get to it, don't worry. :)
Date: June 05, 2008 05:36 am Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?
"No, nothing," he said. He added quietly, "I wasn't expecting anything more from you." *big HUGE sigh* Have I mentioned lately how much I love this story, these little moments? Well, I do...very much.
Author's Response: I'm glad you enjoy it. :)
8 [Report This]Date: June 05, 2008 05:09 am Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?
I am loving this story! Well done to Jim for calling her on her evasiveness! Poor Pam! Look forward to reading more (there is going to be more, right?!).
Author's Response: There will be plenty more. Lots more. I'm glad you're loving it. :)
Date: June 05, 2008 04:15 am Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?
Oooh! Angst. Nice. I'm afraid to write angst in my story because I'm afraid I won't do it well. Great great job.
Also, I loved "Lofty". That made me laugh!
Author's Response: For some reason I just can't get away from angst. Although I usually reserve the worst of it for Angela, poor gal.
10 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2008 09:32 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
Gah! I read all 16 chapters at once and got left hanging in the angst! I have to tell you the "masta" beta part made me guffaw out loud, really loud. Thanks for the belly laugh!
Author's Response: I wish I could say that Masta the beta fish was purely fictional, but it is not. There was a real life Masta (not my fish, thankfully. My fish's name was Rupert.) It always made me chuckle.
Date: June 04, 2008 09:27 pm Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
ha! Pam Anderson I have never thought about that
Author's Response: I can't see Pam as a Pam Anderson. Does not compute.
Date: June 04, 2008 09:24 pm Title: i don't believe all that you said was yesterday
aw embarassed jim! love the dress!
Author's Response: That dress is fantastic. I want one. But enough of the fabulous dress I dream of having - thanks for reviewing! :)
Date: June 04, 2008 08:39 pm Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?
Oh, so this is how it's going to be -- mac and cheese with a side of angst. OK. Play dirty, why dontcha....
Author's Response: I give and I taketh away. I'm going to be the co-manager of Hotel Hell soon enough.
Date: June 04, 2008 08:36 pm Title: are we getting closer or are we just getting more lost?
Loving these fast updates! This is a great line:
He knew that whatever he said next had the possibility to bury him, so he played it cool.
I definitely can see Jim's always having to do this little mental dance. Very nice.
Author's Response: Jim always has to be on his toes.
8 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2008 06:49 pm Title: i'll be your mirror, reflect what you are in case you don't know
I really like the way you're developing Pam & Jim in this story. I'm very much looking forward to more chapters! (And eliminating Roy??)
Author's Response: It sounds like you want me to kill Roy, haha. More chapters (and Roy's untimely death?) will be coming soon! Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: June 04, 2008 05:46 pm Title: i'll be your mirror, reflect what you are in case you don't know
I'm into this hook, line, and sinker! Thanks for updating so quickly. Lovin' every minute of reading this! :) Maddie's the little "I see what's going on between you too" lady. I want to see a little more of her subtle charm.
Author's Response: You'll get to see a little more of Maddie soon. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, and thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: June 04, 2008 01:39 pm Title: i'll be your mirror, reflect what you are in case you don't know
One of them needs to just jump the other already. The waiting is going to kill me.
Author's Response: Well, I certainly hope you don't die before the end. Thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: June 04, 2008 01:17 pm Title: i'll be your mirror, reflect what you are in case you don't know
OK, so I'm completely and totally swept up in this story. Love the interaction between Jim and Pam. I am just grinning now at the thought of PB&J pancakes and antiques. I'm addicted, so keep those updates coming! For your efforts, I promise to keep enthusiastically reviewing.
Author's Response: After writing this, I had such a craving for PB&J pancakes. Delicious. Anywho, I'm glad you're enjoying this. I know I'm having fun. :)
Date: June 04, 2008 12:32 pm Title: i'll be your mirror, reflect what you are in case you don't know
Nice chapter. Jim is a sweetie.
And I think Pam would call her paintings her 'artwork', her work or something more pedestrian. I think think calling it 'her art' is kind of stilted. But I'm really enjoying this.
How quickly can Pam get an annulment? Hmm...
Author's Response: I have spent a some time looking up information on divorce and annulment procedures in Pennsylvania. The buzz words are "irretrievably broken" (and you may be hearing that phrase again here... dun dun dun!).
9 [Report This]Date: June 04, 2008 06:49 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
Love the part of her not taking his name. Didn't see that coming but a nice detail.
Author's Response: I'm just full of surprises (and, apparently, angst).
Date: June 04, 2008 05:54 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
Love this story. Really.
Author's Response: I'm happy to hear that. Thank you.
Date: June 04, 2008 04:31 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
It felt like a victory because he knows what it means! Good chapter. I was unsure of where you were going with Maddie's story in the last chapter, and now it is all becoming clearer. I'm a little slow, like Kevin. Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you. :)
Date: June 04, 2008 04:26 am Title: if you were an ocean, i'd learn to float
Sweet cheeks!!
And yay for Pam not taking Roy's name. It will make it easier when they split.
Author's Response: Maddie is a cheek pincher of the worst kind. ;)