9 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2008 06:54 pm Title: i been the distance and i need some rest
AGGGHHH!!! The suspense is killing me! I've been coming back throughout the weekend to check on the progress of this one. I'm really, really loving it! Great job!
9 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2008 06:54 pm Title: i been the distance and i need some rest
AGGGHHH!!! The suspense is killing me! I've been coming back throughout the weekend to check on the progress of this one. I'm really, really loving it! Great job!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) And thanks for reviewing.
Date: June 08, 2008 06:16 pm Title: i been the distance and i need some rest
Please tell me Pam is in town because she had to file her no-fault divorce within the state of Pennsylvania! (Jim probably has a very large glass slipper, BTW).
Author's Response: Yes. And so there shall be 47 more chapters that involve lawyers in meetings. (I could MAYBE be kidding.)
Date: June 08, 2008 05:15 pm Title: i been the distance and i need some rest
Certainly didn't expect this little bit o' levity. Envisioning the Dunder Mifflin Players' take on Cinderella brought a big ole smile to my face. What a trainwreck! Loved it!
Author's Response: I figured I needed to add a little bit of joy in there. And there's nothing better than a Michael Scott idea.
Date: June 08, 2008 03:59 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
You are really quick with the updates. I love it. I don't know how much more I can take though of Jim being so sad.
Author's Response: He'll smile at some point. Eventually.
Date: June 08, 2008 01:34 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
I ended up liking this so much more than I ever expected to. It was well written, and the characters were fleshed out well. I especially loved that you cut back on overt drama, opting instead for the steady tension in the background - it made it more honest.
Author's Response: Thank you, and thanks for reviewing. :)
Date: June 08, 2008 10:20 am Title: pushing on through, all i wanna do is get over you
*sigh* Still waiting for my heart to be unbroken, but I have to admit that I'm kinda enjoying the angst ; )
Author's Response: Well, I'm glad the angst is enjoyable. :)
Date: June 08, 2008 09:43 am Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
Wow. Great couple of chapters added since I last checked. I'm not even suspicious of the Abby/Karen character. Should I be? You wrote her very well. She's very likeable.
Author's Response: She's not a threat. Jim and Pam themselves are obstacle enough.
Date: June 08, 2008 07:34 am Title: pushing on through, all i wanna do is get over you
Another great chapter. You're really good at this!
Author's Response: Thank you! :) I'm glad you're liking it.
Date: June 08, 2008 04:23 am Title: pushing on through, all i wanna do is get over you
OK, as long as this Abby chick stays in 'pesky little sister' territory and doesn't stray into 'contrived plot device' territory, we'll get along just fine.
Author's Response: I think Jim and Pam have more than enough issues to deal with without adding something like that into the mix. Plus, I think she's a little young for him (but I say that like I've never heard of Hugh Hefner haha).
Date: June 08, 2008 03:01 am Title: pushing on through, all i wanna do is get over you
I feel so sorry for Jim! I really hope Pam gets back in Scranton the next chapter. She really needs to do something!! By the way, Abby's a really nice character, I like her. Can't wait to read more, please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Pam's going to do something. Just what I cannot say yet.
Date: June 07, 2008 09:44 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
Augh!! Always leave us with angst!! Hope more is coming soon!! Like right now!
Author's Response: More is definitely coming soon! :)
Date: June 07, 2008 09:05 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
Oh, Pam. Why must you be so retarded. Please decide upon your feelings before I bust one of my vital organs.
Author's Response: Haha, Pam is Kevin-slow when it comes to her emotions.
Date: June 07, 2008 08:42 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
oh no I can't believe this happened! :( where is my happiness?!?!?
Author's Response: Happiness shall occur.
Date: June 07, 2008 08:28 pm Title: now what's holding you back? i don't know, i don't know
Argh! I am dying to find out what happens next, but I am just too awesome to not leave a review, so there you go.
Your writing owns the face off of a lot of writing. :D
Okay, reading on.
Author's Response: Haha, I'm glad you're liking it! :)
Date: June 07, 2008 07:25 pm Title: let's not forget ourselves, good friend
Now you went and broke my heart. Run Pam Now!
Author's Response: I'm just breaking hearts all over the place with these last two chapters. I will hopefully repair them.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 07:19 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
Seeing that this story has been updated always makes me so happy! And this chapter was so heartbreaking. This: "...her husband and the man she loved were two different people." did me in. And it seems so true to the Pam character that she would realize and be aware of this, but still just accept it as her reality. But she really needs to slap out of it soon! lol
Author's Response: Pam needs a little sense knocked into her.
Date: June 07, 2008 07:12 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
Much love going out to you. This is a great story, I am so happy you have been doing these great quick updates. Oh and by the way : P.S. It may be stupid, but you'll always be my best friend. Beautiful.
Author's Response: That line was a last minute addition, so I'm glad you liked it. :)
Date: June 07, 2008 06:38 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
Oh! You're broken my heart! This is just so good.
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it. And I will try to unbreak that heart of yours. :)
Date: June 07, 2008 06:37 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
I love this story. I want a neighbor like Maddie.
Author's Response: Glad you like it. :) I've never had a cool neighbor. I live vicariously through fictional characters.
Date: June 07, 2008 06:28 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
PAM! Drive to the airport, like NOW!!
(Thanks for the frequent updates, BTW.)
Author's Response: What she should do and what she does are two different things. Silly Pam.
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 06:09 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
and now she can go running to the airport, right?!?!?! Did I guess it?? :P kidding - this is really good. It's one of those weird things where we always want them to be together no matter what, but on another level there's "well, babe, you married him, so deal".... COMPLICATED.
Author's Response: Yes, that's exactly what happens! haha. 'Complicated' definitely describes the relationship here.
Date: June 07, 2008 06:09 pm Title: from the inside out you've changed, girl. you know you have.
Ahgghhhh!!! (Is that how you type a loud sigh?) Amazingly honest. I'm glad you didn't have Pam break her wedding vows. I don't see either she or Jim being that person that does that. But, she clearly knows she's made a huge mistake. Can't wait to see where you take this from here.
Author's Response: She's finally realized what she needs to do... but will she do it? Dun dun duuuuuun.
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 05:26 pm Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen
Oh you're killing me. Pam needs to get it together. Great chapter! I would say update soon but I know you will anyway :)
Author's Response: Yes, I will! :)
Date: June 07, 2008 09:55 am Title: i'm praying, darling; maybe someday we together can be the king and queen
The excellence continues. You were sure right about there being a whole lot of loaded lines. I especially liked the one about getting her feet wet, and not wanting to go all in...the ocean.
I can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Glad you liked that bit. And more shall be up soon. :)