10 [Report This]Date: June 11, 2008 09:09 am Title: Chapter Seven
Aw, very cute banter between the two. =)
Haha I enjoyed that last line.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, Sunshinegirl. I am glad you're enjoying it.
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 07:37 am Title: Chapter Six
Haha, love the awkward teens. I just saw this story. Great work! I'm enjoying every chapter so far. =)
10 [Report This]Date: June 08, 2008 09:33 am Title: Chapter Five
I always enjoy your writing and this looks like some good fun to be had here. Looking forward to it.
Date: June 06, 2008 09:22 am Title: Chapter Five
I am really enjoying this story. A very interesting setting. One I definitely wouldn't have thought of, but it totally is working for me! :)
Author's Response: Hey, thanks! I'm kinda glad that this story is in a setting you wouldn't have thought of. It's nice to bring something fresh to the fanfic table.
Date: June 06, 2008 09:14 am Title: Chapter Five
Not too long. Perfect length. TWSS!! The story is really starting to develop now (loved that first paragraph, dead on!). This is my new fave now so keep 'em coming!
Author's Response:
Wow! I'm somebody's new fave! That is awesome. Thank you for your review! I will try to keep 'em coming. I'm working on the next chapter right now. Thank you!
Date: June 05, 2008 10:27 pm Title: Chapter Four
Great story happening here! It brings back all the awkward and exciting feelings of those teen years. I really liked how you set up the characters in the earlier chapters, and now here they are starting to make a little spark happen! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. Hey was your line about making 'a little spark happen' intentional? Because that was awesome. Thanks again!
Date: June 04, 2008 08:22 am Title: Chapter One
This is very cute. I'm looking forward to a summer of romance!
Author's Response: Thanks khand. I will be adding chapters daily. Stay posted. I appreciate that you commented.
Date: June 03, 2008 02:35 pm Title: Chapter One
Any story that mentions The Ramones is okay by me.
Author's Response: Thanks, Roman Candle. I hope that there's more than just a simple throw away band reference to keep you coming back, though.
Date: June 03, 2008 05:24 am Title: Chapter Three
I love that jim's brain kind of shut down when he saw Pam, it was Pam right? Of course it was...i do like long chapters, but it doesn't matter too much, if the updates are quick! Good work. I loved summer camp as a teen.
Date: June 02, 2008 08:38 pm Title: Chapter One
I like it, I do! keep going.
Author's Response: Hey thanks, iwantphillyjim. I am going to continue. The next chapter will be up tomorrow morning. It'll be a short one, but still...