Date: July 14, 2010 06:01 pm Title: Heaven
i like it..engagement stories are always well recived ;)..
one thing, they should've have danced "sing" by travis..cuz thats the song they "didnt dance" at their "not a date"
5 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 05:41 am Title: Motion
This is great! Please update soon.
Author's Response: drewbers,rnrnThanks! Either I'm getting this review late, or MTT isn't working entirely right... The other three chapters are posted!
Date: June 13, 2008 05:40 am Title: Motion
Really great banter! I very much enjoyed this chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you! Very much appreciated :)
Date: June 12, 2008 08:51 pm Title: Preparation
Loved it.
What is Jim up too with Dwight?
And I absolutley adored the line "Why are you bringing Michael memories into our happy place, Jim, why?”
Author's Response: :D Thanks! The last chapter should be up for you to find out the big plan ;-) hope you like it
Date: June 10, 2008 05:26 pm Title: Preparation
Haha, I love that he gets Dwights help and pranks him anyway. Can't wait for the proposal.
Author's Response: :P I know - he just can't help himself....
Date: June 09, 2008 09:20 pm Title: Preparation
I can't wait!
Date: June 09, 2008 01:04 pm Title: Action
Loved it. What did Jim buy? Can't wait for more. I recognized your name as someone who had left me kind feedback and I thought I must read what you have written. Nicely done, can't wait to read more of your take on the proposal. In my story Jim is still planning things out. I love a good proposal story.
Author's Response: Haha! I'm not going to tell you yet! But thank you so much for the kind words :)
Date: June 08, 2008 05:54 pm Title: Motion
Aw! So sweet! And so totally in character! I love it! MORE please! :D
Author's Response: Thanks :) I like review-swapping with you tonight! I plan to write more tomorrow, so you shouldn't be waiting too long...
10 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 06:14 pm Title: Motion
Cute! Love their banter. Good job.
Author's Response: Thanks! That's always the easy part - my bf and I talk WAY too much like J&P...
9 [Report This]Date: June 07, 2008 11:15 am Title: Motion
I liked that it all seemed very casual and Jim didn't spend half of the chapter thinking about how he was going to propose. Good job.
Author's Response: THANK YOU! I 100% agree with you.
Date: June 06, 2008 10:45 pm Title: Motion
Very sweet. I'm excited to see that there will be more.
Author's Response: Thanks! More is coming soon, JAM with a side of Dwight.