1 [Report This]Date: February 08, 2019 03:37 pm Title: The morning sun's about to break
I just adore how imperfect but relatable and lovable Jim is in this story. And how it is so REAL and understandable that he might have those fears. I can't really say that I would blame either one of them for that time apart being a time when they questioned a lot about their relationship. Beautifully written.
Date: January 03, 2017 08:33 pm Title: The morning sun's about to break
I thought you were going to make us endure Alex the toad.Thank you for leaving his fat as out of the story. What were the Office producers thinking when they had him play a romantic rival to Jim?
Date: December 30, 2009 01:18 am Title: The morning sun's about to break
owww i love "story of the moment" thanks to it we get to read old fics that are so cute like this one
Date: June 18, 2008 08:47 pm Title: The morning sun's about to break
I loved this!! It's just so realistic - how it gradually degrades from seeing each other all the time, to never. That's how it alwasy goes, with even the best of intentions. Mark's speech was great, also felt so real. Awesome how they make up at the end. Well done!!
Date: June 10, 2008 05:19 pm Title: The morning sun's about to break
Lovely! Mild angst is always nice, as long as it has a happy ending.
Date: June 10, 2008 11:29 am Title: The morning sun's about to break
Nice job.
10 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2008 08:19 pm Title: The morning sun's about to break
You're funny, because you act as if more post S4 fics are a BAD thing. Maybe in some cases, but definitely not in yours, because you write them so freakin well. Seriously. And I loved this so, so much. You showed the summer really realistically; how you can love someone so much but still hit rough patches. Great job! :) More post season 4 fic, I say!
Date: June 09, 2008 06:51 pm Title: The morning sun's about to break
Fabulous! I love that Jim's not the perfect boyfriend here. Because I love the guy, but he can be a dick just like any other guy :)
Great fight and I love how they resolve it. Plus you did a great "Office" like thing and gave me a few scenes that you didn't show, but I can picture, which is totally awesome!
Date: June 09, 2008 03:42 pm Title: The morning sun's about to break
Hey, Jim, you wouldn't have to be afraid of losing her if you just freaking propose already! (Sorry, I hate it when people act like idiots when they could be happy instead).
Keep writing post S4 fic if you need to -- there's still over 100 days before S5.
Date: June 09, 2008 01:31 pm Title: The morning sun's about to break
This story is amazing. You really nailed how life is just not easy no matter how much you love someone. Thank you for showing you can still stay together through the good and bad!
9 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2008 12:35 pm Title: The morning sun's about to break
Bashert, as if I could ever get sick of you! This was just a delicious angst sandwich with a side of angst, and it was so delicious ; ) It proves that you're good at whatever style you attempt. Off to read it again...