Date: June 17, 2008 08:41 pm Title: Epilogue
Hee! This was a hilarious and very unique story. The documentary style in this AU environment was very funny, as were all the elements you pulled over from canon - Bob Vance, Vance Vegetation after Dwight's beet seeds! Classic.
Date: June 16, 2008 08:50 am Title: Stood Beneath an Orange Sky
I loved the oasis and the mattress that came out of nowhere. Very cute! The names conversation was funny I didn't know where you were going with it and then you brought on the funny. Dave. Thanks for writing an exit for Karen. I think she'll like Venince.
Date: June 14, 2008 06:39 am Title: Four Out of Ten
This is so hilarious! How can you go wrong with a pantless Jim and Pam's great caboose? Brilliant.
Looking forward to the last chapter!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 09:32 pm Title: Four Out of Ten
OH MY GOD. i love so much about the things this fic chooses to be... this is so warped and hilarious and... I LOVE IT. dwight would make an excellent eunuch guard, i'm sure of it. can't wait for more!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 09:31 pm Title: Four Out of Ten
OH MY GOD. i love so much about the things this fic chooses to be... this is so warped and hilarious and... I LOVE IT. dwight would make an excellent eunuch guard, i'm sure of it. can't wait for more!
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2008 08:36 pm Title: Four Out of Ten
Thought about it some more. Love it!
Even my husband thought it was amazing, fun and creative. It was all that and more.
I laughed so hard at the Kelly babble. I read it out loud to my hubby, and he said you totally got her spot on.
You're breaking my heart if you are serrious about writting only one more chapter. Please Please Please find a way to stretch it out. This is too good for you to stop now.
P.S. This is so good you should submit your story via email to AZLIN at MTT for review and a possible ribbon. I think it is worthy. Deadline is midnight this saturday I think.
You Rock, and thank you.
Author's Response: I really don't think I'll continue it beyond the next chapter, although I might add a short epilogue. You know the old showbiz adage: always leave 'em wanting more. But will there be a sequel? Maybe...
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2008 08:30 pm Title: No Rides, Magic Carpet or Otherwise
Absolutley Fantastic.
You are so brave and imaginative!!!
I read this challenge and saw that no one had responded to it.
How would one even go there?
You Did.
I love you for it.
Great premise.
I love where you took it with the doc crew. Even your disclainer and explaination made me laugh.
Jan/Hunter/Pam wow, funny, gross, sexy? I don't know about that last one.
Please keep writing this story. It is one of my fav's. I'd love it if you would let me know what you think of my story too. After the fireworks. You Rock.
Author's Response: Best review ever? Yes! You definitely put a smile on my face. I'm glad you thought the Jan/Hunter/Pam three-way was funny. It's not a pairing you see too often, is it?
Date: June 12, 2008 03:16 pm Title: Four Out of Ten
So awesome. Bob Vance, Vance Vegetation. It doesn't get any better than this! :D
Author's Response: Thanks!
Date: June 12, 2008 12:08 pm Title: Four Out of Ten
“Wait a second,” he said to Jim. “You’re not a eunuch at all!”
“What? What makes you say that?”
“Because you have an enormous erection.”
Ahhahahahahahhahahahahahahahahahahah.
Holy crap, awesome.
Author's Response: Thanks Brosandi. I liked that part too.
Date: June 12, 2008 11:11 am Title: Four Out of Ten
Bob Vance, Vance Vegetation! I laughed out loud!! This is so exremely funny! I couldn't stop laughing while reading this. I'm looking forward to the next chapter, and to see how you are going to end this hilarious story.
Great!
Author's Response: I actually used a rhyming dictionary to come up with the "Vance Vegetation" line. Looks like it was worth the effort. Thanks!
Date: June 10, 2008 06:01 pm Title: No Rides, Magic Carpet or Otherwise
This sounds like silly fun! Dwight saying his son will be a eunuch, but "it's complicated". LOL. And Michael's mug. Of course, Jan with Hunter. And what I'd pay to see Jim Halpert on a camel giving the camera crew one of his patented "looks".
Can't wait to see the "harem's" reaction to their "rescuer". :)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Thanks for noticing the little details like Michael's mug, it shows you really paid attention...which is good, because there will be a quiz later.
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 09:49 am Title: No Rides, Magic Carpet or Otherwise
Haha... I loved this... it's fun and I don't mind the anachronisms... and the characters are spot on... but I hope there will be some catfights when our fave soldier of fortune comes to rescue them! haha, because why not, right? :) Great job!
Author's Response: So you say you want some catfights? I've got two words for you: stay tuned.
Date: June 10, 2008 07:14 am Title: No Rides, Magic Carpet or Otherwise
I enjoyed this! It's a bit weird and probably the most AU I've ever read, but it's really funny! I'm curious to see where you're gonna go with this! Nice job!
Author's Response: The most AU ever...that's a good way to describe this story! Thanks, 09imagine09.
9 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 04:10 am Title: No Rides, Magic Carpet or Otherwise
:D:D This is hilarious! Totally gross with Jan, though, eww, eww, eww. Please write more!
Author's Response: Yep, Jan has some serious issues in this story. I'm glad I was able to make you laugh AND disgust you...it's not often you get to do both!
Date: June 10, 2008 01:47 am Title: No Rides, Magic Carpet or Otherwise
This really made me laugh. Original and well-written, and I love the twists on the characters. More please!
Author's Response: I'm glad you think it's original, I was really trying for something unique.
Date: June 09, 2008 10:06 pm Title: No Rides, Magic Carpet or Otherwise
This is different. And could be very interesting. And fun! Can't wait for more.
Author's Response: Thank you very much, Bailey08.
Date: June 09, 2008 09:32 pm Title: No Rides, Magic Carpet or Otherwise
Okay so I was a little skeptical at first, but I really enjoyed chapter 1. So please continue.
Author's Response: I understand your skepticism, this is a pretty unusual premise. Glad I won you over!