6 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 04:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
I feel oddly like Pam right now, in that I feel naughty for having Jim's "parts" described to me. That doesn't mean I didn't enjoy it though. :)
Seriously, lovey job. The way you captured Pam's embarrassment and shamefulness in looking at Jim was well done. This line:
That’s what my guilt felt like. I’d glance up at Jim, stare too long, start to think too much and then I’d suddenly realize what I was doing and ZAP. Back to reality. If I could pinpoint where the shock came from, I’d say the little metal collar around my ring finger. And I’d reluctantly return to where I had been trained to stay. Within my invisible fence.
is fantastic.
Date: June 10, 2008 04:55 pm Title: Chapter 1
beautiful.
Date: June 10, 2008 04:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh Pam, what a lucky lady and what a view! Nice job.
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 04:44 pm Title: Chapter 1
Damn girl!
10 [Report This]Date: June 10, 2008 04:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ahhh...we should all be so lucky - to "get to know" Jim Halpert, that is ;)
Lovely, as always. I also loved how you slipped in the little slice of skin you see when he raises his arms up and his tshirt rides up a bit. Yum!