10 [Report This]Date: December 17, 2008 09:09 pm Title: Chapter 1
WOAH, SNOZ. HOLD IT.
"'I'm sorry I'm an ass... and a tree killer." Pam giggled. "You're right, even if things don't work out between us," he had a strong urge to add 'and there's no way I'll let that happen now', but he didn't. "We should always be friends. And I'm such an idiot to let things get as bad as this. You deserve better.' Pam closed her eyes while he was speaking, letting the words wash over her. Why were they doing this all over the phone again?"
Jim gave up on Pam?
I don't know if you're aware, but that is not how JAM fanfiction works! You need to review the rules my friend!
I am totally kidding, although that was extremely unexpected to say the least. I love your JAM dialogue. It feels like I'm there. Except I can't tackle John Krasinski. :D
Date: June 11, 2008 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 1
Congrats on your maiden voyage into angst, snoznoodle! Nice job.
Date: June 11, 2008 10:20 am Title: Chapter 1
I liked this. I've never really thought about it, but I guess to be a heart-breaker and a paper salesman doesn't make you a tree's best friend.
Hehe...very creative.