9 [Report This]Date: June 17, 2008 11:13 am Title: Chapter 1
That was great! Please continue. You've captured Jim and Pam well. I really enjoyed their banter and playfulness throughout this fic. Great job with the dialogue. And this:
Jim all but threatened her with a proposal, like matrimony was a club he was going to beat her over the head with. She had no idea why she found that as charming as she did, but they certainly were a pair.
really made me chuckle. That's pretty much what it was like, wasn't it? :)
Date: June 16, 2008 05:39 pm Title: Chapter 1
Very cute! This story made me smile a lot. And I really like your playful dialogue. It's so them. More "shenanigans" please!
Date: June 14, 2008 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
haha I love the spontaneity. But I want them to have a wedding!
Date: June 14, 2008 03:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I'd like shenanigans please!
Date: June 13, 2008 11:33 pm Title: Chapter 1
is it weird to be thinking..."this is something i would write" as I read this? lol. Probably a way strange comment to make right now but that's what I was thinking...so needless to say - I loved it! haha. This was so much fun! It's definitely substantive enough to stand alone but I would LOVE a follow-up if you are so inclined! Great Jim, Pam voices!
Date: June 13, 2008 09:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nuptial related shenanigans!!!
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 09:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
i love this! i'd like to hear about the shenanigans, please. i like that they are simultaneously boring and yet funnier than they "actually" are (i was just going to write "they actually are" but i wanted to point out that, yes, i do know they are fictional... kinda). your pam and jim are great. yes i love your toby, but, c'mon, this is MTT. more jam shenanigans are like manna around these parts :)
Date: June 13, 2008 08:50 pm Title: Chapter 1
Loved it! Would also love to see more nuptial related shenanigans because you write them so well :)
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 05:56 pm Title: Chapter 1
defintiely more shenanigans!!!!! :) This story was so cute and I love the Jam banter! great chapter. please write more!!
8 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 02:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Well, along with everyone else, I'm voting for more chapters! This is really cute. I especially liked Pam's statement:
“I’m just really confident in the performance capabilities of our car.”
That really tickled my funny bone!
Date: June 13, 2008 11:39 am Title: Chapter 1
SHENANIGANS!
SHENANIGANS!
SHENANIGANS AT LUNCH!!!!
"And this is me breaking up with you" Brillant! So Jim!
7 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 11:05 am Title: Chapter 1
Please write more-- I love your characterization of both Jim and Pam it's really believable. I want to read more!!!
Date: June 13, 2008 07:21 am Title: Chapter 1
Yes, I would love to have more of this. Absolutely adorable!
Date: June 13, 2008 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1
Ok, I'm in for shenanigans! Nice job on the dialogue. And no way Pam passes up a chance to see Jim in a tux. Rowr.
9 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 07:15 am Title: Chapter 1
"MORE! MORE! MORE!" screamed NanReg. Loooooove this. Pitch perfect dialog and such fun!
Date: June 13, 2008 06:19 am Title: Chapter 1
Sweet Jesus, keep going. Please don't make me beg. It's so degrading.
Date: June 13, 2008 05:34 am Title: Chapter 1
I think its a great story. It works as a oneshot, but if you feel like doing more that would be great too!
10 [Report This]Date: June 13, 2008 04:15 am Title: Chapter 1
i think there should definitely be nuptial shenanigans, because i really like the idea of Dwight officiating...at least officitaing something :P
Date: June 12, 2008 11:32 pm Title: Chapter 1
Ummm...I pretty much love EVERYTHING about this story. It's just the kind of humor Jim and Pam have. I'm content to have it end here, but if you can make the future chapters as good as you've made this one (easier said than done), I'm all for it!
Date: June 12, 2008 10:06 pm Title: Chapter 1
I'd say keep going...
I really liked this!
10 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2008 09:49 pm Title: Chapter 1
Aw, this was really cute and very them. I would absolutely love to see more of this, in fact, I DEMAND IT. Ok, not really, I'll ask nicely.. please? I have a feeling you can add more loveliness to what is already pretty darn lovely. :)
8 [Report This]Date: June 12, 2008 09:38 pm Title: Chapter 1
I am the lover of the one shot, but am unable to resist the lure of shenanigans. So more please. This had a wonderful balance of sweetness and mild angst. Poor Pam. I'd love to see Jim introduce her to the concept of it's fun to get married.
The car analogies were fantastic, btw and even if it's only a one shot you've left me satisfied and smiling. ;) Well done.
Date: June 12, 2008 09:04 pm Title: Chapter 1
MORE! Seriously!