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Reviewer: MissCorporate Signed 
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Date: April 30, 2024 06:13 am Title: chapter one
1 [Report This]Date: April 30, 2024 06:13 am Title: chapter one
This story has great imagery and strong characterisation. Just some little tweaks here and there with the tenses and punctuation need to be made. I love the last sentence!
Reviewer: Dwangie Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 15, 2008 02:19 pm Title: chapter one
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 02:19 pm Title: chapter one
ah! i loved it!
"his long fingers dancing in the bowl of jellybeans" was one of my favorite lines! i dont know why - it just sounds so good! :D
amazing work!
Reviewer: kaystar Signed 7 [Report This]
Date: July 05, 2008 10:24 pm Title: chapter one
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, kaystar! It really means a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed. :D
7 [Report This]Date: July 05, 2008 10:24 pm Title: chapter one
A belated "congrats on your first fic here"! I really enjoyed this - especially the part about the expressions in Jim's eyes. And this line was my favorite:
"It rolls around the desk for awhile and teeters silently on the edge for a few seconds before clattering to the floor." It says so much.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review, kaystar! It really means a lot! I'm glad you enjoyed. :D