Date: April 05, 2010 04:57 pm Title: What If I Said This Was For Us
awww i wanna hold jim!
Date: August 17, 2008 10:47 pm Title: Those Stars Shine For Us
Beautifully angsty and emotional! I am so glad they got a second chance to do it right. Thank you for letting them see what was really important.
Date: August 17, 2008 10:41 pm Title: What If I Said I Can't Forget
I loved how he followed her and made sure he was there for her. Kind of feel bad for Karen, though.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely comment!rnI feel bad for Karen, too, but I needed to make Jim and Karen's relationship look harsh compared to Jim and Pam's (so their's stood out). She is a good person, but she just isn't right for him, like you said in a previous comment. rnThanks again! It means a lot to me! :D
Date: August 17, 2008 10:34 pm Title: I Can't Decide If I Should Believe This
I didn't know if she was alive or dead, but I hated to see it end. I hope she doesn't lose the image of the painting in her mind.
Author's Response: I purposely wrote it so the reader would not know if she was alive or dead, so I'm glad that you didn't know! ;D She will never lose the image of the painting, but all good things come to an end, and as new memories and perfections slide into her life, the painting will eventually be forgotten. In a good way, of course. rnThanks so much!
Date: August 17, 2008 10:29 pm Title: What If I Said I Need A Miracle
Wow... I think you may be a bit harsh on Karen, though. But, you're right, she's nice, but she's not Pam. Can't wait to see what's next.
Date: August 17, 2008 10:24 pm Title: I'm Learning the Hard Way
Ooh! What a great turn of events! Your writing is very evocative; I can really feel their pain in this.
Date: August 17, 2008 10:20 pm Title: What If I Said This Was For Us
Excellent! Ilove emotional Jim...it makes me want to comfort him.. Just one thing...early on, you used the word "except," when I think you meant "accept."
Date: August 17, 2008 10:16 pm Title: I Don't Know How To Fix This and I Don't Know Why
Great beginning! Very poignant and sad, but not without hope. You also have quite a gift for descriptive language. Nice work.
Author's Response: Thank you very, very much for all of your comments! I truly appreciate it! It means a lot to me as a writer and I'm thrilled to hear that you are enjoying it. :)
Date: August 14, 2008 01:59 pm Title: What If I Said I Need A Miracle
What a great story. I can't wait to read the rest!
Author's Response: thank you very, very much! :D
Date: July 21, 2008 01:20 pm Title: What If I Said I Can't Forget
This is really good. I've enjoyed reading it and look forward to your final chapter.
Author's Response: thank you so much! i really appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2008 10:50 am Title: I Don't Know How To Fix This and I Don't Know Why
I officially think this story is fantastic. I'm sad to know there's only one chapter left, but at the same time I'm so looking forward to reading it. Again I'll say, your writing is so emotional, I'm hooked on every sentence. Really, this is a beautiful story.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Wow! That really means a lot to me!rnI'm so happy you like it. I'm going to be sad writing the last chapter, but all good things must come to an end. Anyway, thanks so, so, SO much!!!
Date: July 19, 2008 11:03 am Title: I Can't Decide If I Should Believe This
What a way you have with words. This is pure poetry. When you get it all posted, I'm going to re-read it altogether.
Author's Response: thank you so much! i truly appreciate it!rnim glad you will re-read it! part 6 will be out late tonight or late tomorrow night [i tend to do my writing at night]. then part 7 will come soon after to finish it up. :) thanks so much for your very nice comment!
10 [Report This]Date: July 15, 2008 03:10 pm Title: What If I Said I Need A Miracle
Wow!! Did not see THAT coming!
Author's Response: hahaha thanks so much!rnthe next chapter will most likely be out late tonight! :D
Date: July 14, 2008 04:28 pm Title: What If I Said I Need A Miracle
O.K. Now I'm officially intrigued! I'm putting 2 & 2 together and probably coming up with 5, but I'll see after you post your next chapter. Can't wait !!
Author's Response: yay! im sooo glad you are enjoying it! chapter 5 will probably be out late tonight or tomorrow morning. :D
Date: July 13, 2008 03:33 pm Title: I'm Learning the Hard Way
I'm enjoying this one. I'm not sure where you're going with this after reading the last couple of paragraphs, but I'm certainly intrigued. It's very good and I'm looking forward to your next chapters.
Author's Response: thanks so much! oh don't worry - i have a lot planned! it will definitely be kicked up a notch! thanks so much for your comment - it's greatly appreciated!
9 [Report This]Date: July 13, 2008 10:53 am Title: I'm Learning the Hard Way
Just caught up with this story, and I'm really enjoying it -- your writing it beautiful! Can't wait to read more.
Author's Response: thank you so much!!! i really, really appreciate it!
10 [Report This]Date: July 08, 2008 09:10 pm Title: I Don't Know How To Fix This and I Don't Know Why
I love the mood you've captured here, how they're both alone in a whirlwind. Great job!
Author's Response: thank you so, so much!