Date: March 13, 2011 01:34 pm Title: Five Times the Golden Rule Was Broken
I still love this. You did such an amazing job of creating real people and real relationships in so few words. Just lovely. Are you out there anymore? I wish you'd write something new!
Date: July 16, 2008 01:38 pm Title: Five Times the Golden Rule Was Broken
This was so cool. My mind, like blown. I like them breaking the golden rule. Makes my brain go whoa! So cool!
Author's Response: Glad you enjoyed it. :) I tried to find moments that would fit into this, with the fifth just being a little more hands-on and deliberate.
Date: July 10, 2008 07:00 pm Title: Five Times the Golden Rule Was Broken
This was so neat. I especially loved the fifth segment.
"He'll ask."
He sure as heck better! Great story.
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! :) The fifth was the one I wrote first.
Date: July 10, 2008 07:00 pm Title: Five Times the Golden Rule Was Broken
This was so neat. I especially loved the fifth segment.
"He'll ask."
He sure as heck better! Great story.
Author's Response: Oh, yeah, he definitely better! Glad you liked it. :)
Date: July 10, 2008 06:25 pm Title: Five Times the Golden Rule Was Broken
Very clever, carbondalien. Of course, I especially like the last one : )
Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :) The 5th was actually the first one I wrote. I went in reverse.
9 [Report This]Date: July 10, 2008 06:15 pm Title: Five Times the Golden Rule Was Broken
What a sweet little story! I really like this Jared. My favorites were when he lent Pam the money to buy the Jinx Coke and the end when he showed her the ring footage. Nicely done!
Author's Response: Thank you! I had originally planned to show more of Pam's interactions with the others as well, but something with Jared stuck with me. Glad you liked it. :)