10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2008 03:02 pm Title: Chapter 4: By the Numbers
Ah! I can't stand so much suspense! please update soon!
Author's Response: I've got the outline for the next chapter already done and I'm about to start writing soon. I promise the wait won't be as long. :D
Date: August 04, 2008 02:11 pm Title: Chapter 4: By the Numbers
I think some of your dates got mixed up in this chapter; some of the Sept 2009 ones I assume are meant to be Sept 2008. The timeline had me a bit confused for a while! But an intriguing read!
Author's Response: Thank you. That completely escaped my eyes. I hope it didn't take you too far out of the story because the timeline is really important. I'm glad to know you're paying attention.
Date: August 04, 2008 09:38 am Title: Chapter 4: By the Numbers
great story!
Author's Response: :D.
Date: August 04, 2008 08:25 am Title: Chapter 4: By the Numbers
What happened? Where is Jim?
Author's Response: You'll know what's up with Jim soon. Real soon.
10 [Report This]Date: July 21, 2008 09:01 am Title: Chapter 3: Break and Shake
wow - great great story! You're definitely got me hooked (and I'm really bad at figuring these things out for myself...) Just please don't let them be dead!
Date: July 20, 2008 06:54 pm Title: Chapter 3: Break and Shake
WOW! I am very interested in what the heck is going on here!! I love the way you are writing this...and I will try to catch you online soon...promise!
Date: July 20, 2008 05:02 pm Title: Chapter 3: Break and Shake
Ok, so following it so far... but the last flashforward was confusing... hm... who are these people? not the paramedics, right? hm...
its the neighbors! the man and his wife! i swear. don't lie. :)
Author's Response: I just realized today how confusing it's probably going to get. I'm going to have to have 'previouslies' at the beginning of every chapter. Paramedics? I don't think so. I don't think a paramedic would be dragging her to the bathroom or that her partner would be a rapist...hopefully. I'm not saying anything else though. You'll have to stock me down on AIM or keep reading. :D
Author's Response: I just realized today how confusing it's probably going to get. I'm going to have to have 'previouslies' at the beginning of every chapter. Paramedics? I don't think so. I don't think a paramedic would be dragging her to the bathroom or that her partner would be a rapist...hopefully. I'm not saying anything else though. You'll have to stock me down on AIM or keep reading. :D
Date: July 19, 2008 11:37 pm Title: Chapter 2: Raise and Shine
Where is Jim?? This story is intense, but I am excited to see where you take it. Update soon!!
Author's Response: I just submitted the next chapter. I'm really glad you like it. You need to get back online again woman!
Date: July 19, 2008 02:54 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
I really like this story, I am completely confused but also enthralled by the idea, because I know it will all come unraveled in the end. I can't wait for an update!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! We will eventually have to catch up with the future. If you like this you'll probably really like the show. There should be a new chapter either tonight or tomorrow morning.
10 [Report This]Date: July 19, 2008 08:00 am Title: Chapter 2: Raise and Shine
Um, I'm so confused but I really REALLY like this story so I hope you update soon so that I am not so confused.
Author's Response: The actual show Damages is even more confusing but so many grades better. You should check it out. I'm really happy you like it and more should probably be on it's way tonight if we're lucky.
Date: July 19, 2008 07:39 am Title: Chapter 2: Raise and Shine
So many other characters with great potential! What a fabulous Whodunnit!!
Author's Response: :D Thank you. More characters to come.
Date: July 19, 2008 07:02 am Title: Chapter 2: Raise and Shine
Where is Jim? Is he dead? Killed by the weird neighbor and his wife?
Good work. :)
Author's Response: Giant question mark about Jim and I ain't telling! :P The neighbor and his wife....interesting...
Date: July 18, 2008 07:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
I go on vacation and come back to you killing Pam??? NO!! Ok, but seriously this is good stuff and you have me intrigued. Add soon and please don't kill her!!
Author's Response: You're home! :D I'm glad you and Jubjub are back and I'm really happy you like it so far. I hope to catch you soon. The only hint you'll get is that you'll know if she is dead or alive in the next chapter. :)
Date: July 18, 2008 06:17 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
this is starting to be really good but i hope that this doesnt end like i think its going to.
Author's Response: Where do you think it's going?
Date: July 18, 2008 11:53 am Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
I love this! I absolutely adore the tv show, so I'm looking forward to what you write!
Author's Response: :D I think more people need to watch Damages. I just finished writing the next chapter. I need to beta it and then it will be posted shortly...hopefully.
Date: July 18, 2008 08:31 am Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
Very interesting, but no deaths please. I can't handle that.
Author's Response: I hope you'll keep reading.
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
Oh no!!! What happened to poor Pam? Please tell me she's not dead. Also where is Jim? You can't just leave it here. I need more! :)
Great begining. I hope they'll both be ok. :)
Author's Response: You'll have to keep reading to figure out what's going on with Jim and Pam. I am writing more right now so hopefully it won't be too long before I post. :)
Date: July 17, 2008 07:01 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
Good cliff hanger!
Author's Response: :D Thank you.
10 [Report This]Date: July 17, 2008 06:45 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
Whoa. Continues. I really want to know what's going on. First suspect? Landlady.
Author's Response: Interesting... I'm not going to give anything a way though. Stay tuned.
Date: July 17, 2008 06:42 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
I am also intrigued...curious to see where it's going!
Author's Response: Thank you. That's exactly what I wanted.
Date: July 17, 2008 05:19 pm Title: Chapter 1: Tubs for Two
Alright, I'm intrigued. I like the use of flashbacks. :)
Author's Response: Flash forwards. Thank you very much. I'm glad you liked it.