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Reviewer: madmen fanatic Signed [Report This]
Date: June 02, 2011 02:50 pm Title: Chapter 1

1. I'm so glad Jim had these moments of love and tenderness with Pam. 2. i choose to believe this is the start of Pam's journey to realizing her True Love for Jim and will soon start to slowly end her relationship with Roy. I know I am spoiling the Chapters 2-12 that you didn't write, but, there you have it. :)

Reviewer: PuffingNoise Signed 10 [Report This]
Date: July 21, 2008 08:16 am Title: Chapter 1

This is so beautiful I had tears in my eyes the whole time.

Reviewer: NanReg Signed 9 [Report This]
Date: July 20, 2008 03:30 pm Title: Chapter 1

Gorgeous.

Reviewer: ISayOye Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2008 05:08 pm Title: Chapter 1

This is screaming to be continued. Just perfect.

Reviewer: Colette Signed [Report This]
Date: July 19, 2008 05:07 pm Title: Chapter 1

This one line: The grass is pressed flat where their bodies had been tells me more than 17 chapters laboriously  chronicling the heaviness of it all.  He’s afraid of pushing too hard. There's S2 Jim in 6 simple words. 

There's an emotional lushness to everything you don't say - and that's what I love about your writing. This is no exception.

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