1 [Report This]Date: September 27, 2018 06:18 am Title: Welcome Home
How does this only have 5 reviews?! It’s fluff and hot and I love it? Mmmmm...I can definitely picture Jim doing that one hand shirt removal guys do. 😂 Well done!
10 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2009 11:38 pm Title: Welcome Home
loooooovely!
Date: August 11, 2008 10:25 am Title: Welcome Home
I like it when fluff can effectively straddle the hot/sweet line. This did so very well.
Author's Response: I'm glad that you thought so. I have no problem with smut whatsosever, but personally I like the challenge of writing emotion and feeling without being graphic necessarily. To me, its more difficult then describing how Pole A inserts into Slot B (TWSS). Either way, thank you for reviewing, I appreciate you taking the time belsum.
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2008 08:24 pm Title: Welcome Home
Nicely done! Hot! In character!
I love the relationship you show here. Both of them still a little stunned that the other one chose them. It's all so well written but I think this was my favorite passage:
Jim was beginning to doubt his abilities and feel a little foolish as he stood naked outside of the running shower. It wasn’t as if he understood why the shirt-pull worked on her, but he knew it usually was like igniting the end of a long fused stick of dynamite.
I love the combination of cockiness and self-doubt. Very Jim, I think!
Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked that passage and felt it was in character. I tried to show how much they love each other, and that there is still a residual shock of the fact that someone they love like that could love them back (that's the dream isn't it?) Thank you for taking the time to review Vampiric Blood!
10 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2008 07:53 pm Title: Welcome Home
Whoa. This was smokin' hot, without being graphic. Perfect. I also loved how you captured the way they feel about each other, and I like that it's equal. I get so tired of the Jim loves Pam more than Pam loves Jim stuff.
Author's Response: You make a good point, a lot of stories do seem to have one of the characters worrying about loving the other more, and while I guess that's realistic for a relationship, I think they both love each other very much (I do realize they're not real people....sort of). Also I'm glad that you liked the steam without the fire so to speak. I find writing the tension and emotion between them more rewarding than describing sex. Thanks for taking the time to review and for the kind words Annika, I appreciate it.
9 [Report This]Date: August 04, 2008 07:10 pm Title: Welcome Home
Thank you, thank you, THANK YOU, dundiefromgod. Because of you, I can go to bed with a smile on my face. Whew. Thank you.
Author's Response: Well if nothing else then I've done something positive with this story. I'm glad that you liked it NanReg, its unabashedly a piece of fluff, but there's nothing wrong with that once in a while, right? Thank you for taking the time to review, I appreciate your kind words.