Date: May 15, 2010 02:53 pm Title: I can't marry you
wow it really was a long time i thought this was a new story XD
Author's Response: Either way I loved reading the progression of your comments from the first chapter to the third. I promise Jim will not kill himself or his brother or Pam.
Date: May 15, 2010 02:44 pm Title: I won't let go
yes jim definitly is gonna kill himself
Date: May 15, 2010 02:18 pm Title: I could make you happier
wow definitly not kidding!
and his BROTHER!!! you really want jim to kill himself right?
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2010 12:08 pm Title: I can't marry you
Well I was going to fuss at your lack of chapters, but if you have more..... JK :) I like the way they are such good friends that they tease each other after such a huge thing as that kiss must have been.
"“I’m not sure I want to know what you think first base is.”"
Very cute :)
Author's Response: Yeah, I wanted to put them in a situation where they were such good friends and see how that might affect they way they deal with their feelings for each other... so we shall see... Also, thanks for reviewing!
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2010 12:02 pm Title: I won't let go
Your not crazy, it's a great story! Never have Pam and Jim been brought together so quickly before, under such unique circumstances. And the little reverse Casino Night? Very nice, always kinda wondered what would have happened if Pam had been the one to make the first move.
10 [Report This]Date: May 15, 2010 11:58 am Title: I could make you happier
Jim and Roy brothers????? So extremly weird and yet I'm loving it, maybe that makes me weird too? :)
Date: March 27, 2009 05:20 am Title: I won't let go
this is great.. although i would like some description here.. who is this Roy character, is he the same as on the show, can we have a bit more? I love their relationship in your story, its great :)
Date: September 24, 2008 03:27 am Title: I won't let go
hi! is this going to be updated? i keep checking back and being disappointed :( would love to see it continued!
Author's Response: sorry, yes, it will be updated. I just went back to school and I still haven't been able to carve out writing time but I promise you I will have an update soon.
Date: August 18, 2008 04:50 pm Title: I won't let go
I love the idea that Jim and Roy are brothers!
Author's Response: Ah, good. I'll eventually get to more interaction between them than just phone conversations. Should be interesting!
8 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2008 06:19 pm Title: I won't let go
Hmm, even Pam's parents don't want to hear she's engaged to Roy. I really like where this is going (assuming that this is leading to a happy ending, of course!)
Author's Response: A happy ending is in the cards, but obviously a happy complicated ending.
8 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2008 06:01 pm Title: I could make you happier
I like the Jim and Roy are brothers twist - very ingenious! This sounds very hopeful:
"Maybe he’d get so drunk tonight that he’d tell her that he was in love with her. Maybe she’d get so drunk that she’d tell him that she was afraid Roy wasn’t the one."
Author's Response: Thank you! That's definitely foreshadowing at it's finest... or worst. Whatever.
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2008 09:09 pm Title: I won't let go
Yes! The Awesomeness that is Jim is making her crack! Go Jim! (Okay, I'll stop with the exclamation points.) Can't wait to hear Roy's excuse. Geez, even both sets of parents are aware of Roy's faults. That's sad. Keep 'em coming italianfood :)
Author's Response: Yeah, you can't deny Jim. You especially can't deny him once he starts trying harder either!
Date: August 12, 2008 06:21 pm Title: I won't let go
Oh man that was awesome. I really hope she wises up to Roy soon and gets with Jim. If you're parents aren't happy about the engagement, that's a sign.
Author's Response: It is a sign and Pam will eventually see more and more signs along the way.
8 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2008 02:50 pm Title: I won't let go
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^ My brain on this story. In a good way. I just hope you try to flesh out Roy a bit, I've always had a soft spot for him =)
Author's Response: I've always looked at Roy differently after he had his little talk with Pam in the Negotiation. Definitely not a bad guy and I'm not planning on making him one. I think sometimes he just didn't appreciate what he had with Pam, and that will be my main focus with their relationship.
Date: August 12, 2008 12:53 pm Title: I won't let go
This story is so intriguing, but also makes me very angry. I love that they kissed, but urgh Jim! I trust that you will give me a happy outcome though :)
Author's Response: LOL. Don't worry. Jim is for sure going to kick it into gear.
Date: August 12, 2008 07:54 am Title: I won't let go
Roy as Jom's brother...you're crazy! Just kidding. This is too much for my little heart. I can't wait. Thanks for taking the time to write it.
Author's Response: It's my pleasure. Tell your little heart to give it time and it'll get a payoff.
10 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2008 07:54 am Title: I won't let go
Yeah!!! (Doing a happy dance)
Author's Response: woot
9 [Report This]Date: August 12, 2008 01:36 am Title: I won't let go
I like it :) Keep it coming!
Author's Response: Hey deerinthepark! Glad you're on board!
Date: August 12, 2008 12:56 am Title: I won't let go
Oh, this is heartbreaking! It is hard to pick Roy as Jim's brother, but I like how it puts Jim and Pam into a different scenario than they'd have otherwise.
Author's Response: I reread and rewrote that chapter so many times I'm glad that in the end it had some emotion, especially heartbreaking emotion (I live for that). We'll eventually get into the brother dynamic between the two, and hopefully it won't seem too contrived. Thanks so much for reading!
10 [Report This]Date: August 06, 2008 05:12 pm Title: I could make you happier
Heathus Christ! That was great!
^that was my reaction to my dinner^
This story makes me feel like the ugly Jonas brother....sad and oh so needy for more attention.
Author's Response: Really? I was really trying to go with making you feel like it was the "devil at play." Is that not how it came off? Damn. Please Pray, people painting porous ponds. <--- alliteration
Date: August 06, 2008 04:07 pm Title: I could make you happier
Oh man I can't wait to see how this turns out. This should be soooo good.
Author's Response: I think it'll turn out good. ;)
Date: August 05, 2008 04:52 pm Title: I could make you happier
See, now you start with the writing and the posting and the awesome, and I start with the reading and the enjoying...it's like a vicious cycle, only not vicious. Looking forward to more. Jim...*sigh*
Author's Response: glad you're enjoying the viciousness of it all!
Date: August 05, 2008 03:41 pm Title: I could make you happier
This is AU to the extreme -- I like the playful (flirtatious?) banter between Jim and Pam at the beginning. Jim and Roy and brothers? Nice twist. Poor Jim it doesn't matter what world he is in, he still has to watch Pam w/ Roy.
Author's Response: I know, you think in an alternate universe I'd make things easier for him. Gosh.
10 [Report This]Date: August 05, 2008 03:36 pm Title: I could make you happier
Yay! A new story from you! Looking forward to the backstory on how the Halpert brothers met Pam, especially how Roy "won" her over Jim. What, is she blind? :)
Author's Response: Cheeb!! I know, what is wrong with Pam!?!? But we will eventually get into that.
Date: August 05, 2008 12:38 pm Title: I could make you happier
Nice - good and angsty, making us want more more MORE.
But could Jim's brother really be like Roy? (He sure sounds like him) Well, I guess that's what AU is all about, yes?
Thanks for writing - enjoying it very much!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading! And that's exactly what AU is all about... maybe, right?