Date: June 09, 2023 05:33 am Title: I can't do this without you
I'm glad Jim and Roy have a good relationship in this story, It's nice to see the alternative (and it also makes the most sense if they're brothers).
1 [Report This]Date: June 09, 2023 02:47 am Title: I could make you happier
Wow, what an introduction. You weren't kidding with 'extreme', but I'm all here for it!
1 [Report This]Date: May 30, 2023 12:17 am Title: Epilogue: We are now three
This was such an interesting and unique premise, and the execution was great. I'm not going to lie, I was a little skeptical about seeing Roy and Jim as brothers, but I'm glad I decided to read it anyway.
Thank you for writing and sharing this story with us!
1 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2021 02:54 pm Title: Epilogue: We are now three
This was amazing It is probably one of the most A AU I've ever read but I was sucked in right away and read the entire thing instead of working (ahhh). One of my favorites.
1 [Report This]Date: April 06, 2021 07:21 am Title: I swear I won't say anything
Oh my poor Jimmy 😭
1 [Report This]Date: February 04, 2019 06:42 pm Title: Epilogue: We are now three
I just adore this fic. One of the most extreme AUs yes but also one of the best done, still managing to somehow still stay in character. Nice work.
10 [Report This]Date: August 20, 2011 12:17 am Title: Epilogue: We are now three
Terrific story all around. Angst, true love, good smut... Thanks for sharing it with us.
Date: March 04, 2011 10:48 am Title: I'm in love with you
Whew! Glad that's out in the open. :)
Author's Response: I love reading comments like this! So glad you came back after it was complete. I hope you enjoyed it all.
Date: March 03, 2011 09:42 pm Title: I wanted to see if maybe you loved me
So close! Just say it, someone! Jim, say "I'm in love with you." Pam, say "I'm in love with you, too." Easy peasie! lol
Date: March 03, 2011 09:35 pm Title: I never has as much fun than when I'm with you
Roy was sweet for trying, and it's sad they are in a relationship that's not meant to be. I hope he finds the right one who will make him laugh and he'll want to make her laugh.
Date: March 03, 2011 09:22 pm Title: I swear I won't say anything
Jim picked out the bracelet, too, didn't he? He really just needs to tell her
Date: March 03, 2011 09:09 pm Title: I was thinking out loud
Yikes! Oops, bad slip up Jim...
Date: March 03, 2011 08:54 pm Title: I can't do this without you
What?? NO!! This better end well! ;)
Date: March 03, 2011 08:41 pm Title: I can't marry you
“Anytime, but you need to buy me dinner. First base isn’t free...I’m not sure I want to know what you think first base is.”
lol That's a great conversation! So excited about where this is going!
Date: March 03, 2011 08:33 pm Title: I won't let go
Oh, what a jerk. Poor confused Pam and poor heartbroken Jim. Great story
Date: March 03, 2011 08:15 pm Title: I could make you happier
I wanted to wait for completion, before starting to read it. This first chapter has me hooked, though!
Date: February 27, 2011 03:35 pm Title: Epilogue: We are now three
Great AU Story, I can't wait for more for sure from you overall one thing about you though is at the Authors note i think you give basically the summary of the chapter in that and I think a good story should have like some unknown into it. I suggest you take that part out it will be better to me. But its a suggestion, you still have a solid story still. So good stuff and please keep it up!
Author's Response: Thank you, BigManOnCampus! Very much appreciated.
I add that little summary to the beginning of each chapter so it makes it easier to navigate chapters from the table of contents, and that maybe the completely wrong way to use that author's chapter notes. Eeek! I really try not to give away anything too major in them and if I have I apologize. I'll have to go back and peruse them and possibly edit them way down.
Date: February 27, 2011 08:55 am Title: Epilogue: We are now three
I'm so sorry it took me this long to finally say how much I loved this whole story. I'm sad to see it end but thank you for writing such a different take of their love story. Really great job.
Author's Response: Thank you, khand3stooges! That means so much to me!
Date: February 26, 2011 03:33 am Title: I could make you happier
Only reviewing now, but I just wanted to say I love everything this AU chooses to be! I remember thinking when I read the first chapter that the premise was very interesting, and the following chapters were just as good. Also, your pace of updating is really impressive! It was a little bit like Christmas morning to go here and see a new chapter had been added. Great job, and hope you have other things in stock for us :)
Author's Response: Awesome! I'm so happy you enjoyed it. And if can continue to make it like Christmas morning more often I will. :)
10 [Report This]Date: February 25, 2011 07:49 am Title: Epilogue: We are now three
Simply beautiful. A perfect end to a story that you should be very proud of, italianfood."I used to dream about you like this before I knew why"-- *sigh* so romantic.
Author's Response: Thank you, NanReg! I really appreciate all the reviews!
9 [Report This]Date: February 24, 2011 07:17 pm Title: Epilogue: We are now three
I'm in love with Italian food and I'm in love with this story.
Grazie!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! <3
Date: February 24, 2011 04:04 pm Title: Epilogue: We are now three
I'm in mourning that this is over :(
Great epilouge :)
Author's Response: I did a little mourning myself too. Thank you for always leaving reviews. It really means a lot, especially since I know how bad of a reviewer I am.
Date: February 24, 2011 02:12 pm Title: I could make you happier
Hate to see this end. Really loving it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, lovingthursdays!
Date: February 24, 2011 01:53 pm Title: Epilogue: We are now three
Aww, what a great ending. I loved this whole story, start to finish! :)
Well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! That really makes me happy to know that you loved all of it!
Date: February 24, 2011 01:26 pm Title: Epilogue: We are now three
Okay I know you probably didn't intend for this to happen but I'm wiping away tears from my face right now. This was so beautiful, the image at the end is just so wonderful. I love that Jim and Roy get along now and the little family that Jim has now. And, I absolutely can't tell you how lovely it is that you kept the baby's name as Cecelia. I'm excited to read what you come up with next! :-) Congratulations on this, you should be proud, this is wonderful.
Author's Response: I didn't intend for anyone to cry, but is it weird that I'm touched that you did. Thank you so much for all the lovely reviews you left throughout the story!