Date: August 17, 2008 09:34 pm Title: Chapter 5: It would have been great, but not perfect
Heeeyyyyy (Kevin-speak), you avoided some smut there. That's okay though - what you did touch on was perfect (TWSS?). This was very real-sounding; returning to hunt for a joke online would be classically in-character for Michael Scott. I could also see them smooching some more before they part tonight....whoa, that was good make-out stuff. (flapping hand to fan face)
Thanks again Skeet. (Is it okay if I call you Skeet?)
Author's Response: Yep, Skeet it is! I kind of wish I had made my story MA cause I keep wondering exactly how far I can go with M. Anyway, there's more coming....TWSS.
Date: August 17, 2008 07:56 pm Title: Chapter 5: It would have been great, but not perfect
So classic that Jim and Pam would be interrupted by Michael while trying to have something happen in the office. And I'm kinda glad it happened. I agree with Jim's (and obviously yours) that the first time they are together he shouldn't still be with Karen in any way. Can't wait for the next chapter!
8 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2008 05:23 pm Title: Chapter 5: It would have been great, but not perfect
I'm so glad Jim told her he loved her and that their first time wasn't in the conference room. Can't wait to read about the break-up with Karen...
8 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2008 05:05 pm Title: Chapter 4: It could all have been avoided...
Great way to get Karen out of the picture but now I'm worried that Phyllis will come to the office and catch them ala Dwight and Angela!
8 [Report This]Date: August 17, 2008 04:56 pm Title: Chapter 3
I held my breath as I read this - I was so afraid that Karen would discover them in the parking lot. Whew! Yay for FNB!
Date: August 17, 2008 04:41 pm Title: Chapter 2 :The Dress
Another awesome chapter. I loved this:
"She knew being there would be surreal given the circumstances, but maybe it would make him remember. Remind him why he loved her if he had completely forgotten."
Date: August 17, 2008 04:28 pm Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
Wow, great first chapter! I love the idea of Michael having another CN - and really love the thought of Pam wearing the dress.
Date: August 16, 2008 01:50 pm Title: Chapter 4: It could all have been avoided...
Hurry up and write, would ya? *grin*
Date: August 16, 2008 10:14 am Title: Chapter 4: It could all have been avoided...
it already served justice for me;)
Date: August 16, 2008 09:38 am Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
I can't believe this is your first story. I like it a lot!
Date: August 14, 2008 04:36 pm Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
I can absolutely picture the look on his face when he saw her in that same dress, same hair. Go Pam!
Keep writing!
Date: August 14, 2008 09:41 am Title: Chapter 3
Oh I love it! I love it MORE!
This is delicious Skeet - can't WAIT for your smut! We have faith in you.
MCC
Date: August 14, 2008 08:27 am Title: Chapter 3
Yeah! I'm liking where this is headed.
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 07:42 am Title: Chapter 3
Very, very well done.
10 [Report This]Date: August 14, 2008 05:45 am Title: Chapter 3
Just when I think there are no more fresh twists on this story, here you are. Wow, this is just great! You've done a wonderful job conveying Jim's emotion and Pam's regret. Can't wait for more.
Date: August 13, 2008 04:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
I can't wait to find out where this story goes!
Bold move by Pam!
M
Date: August 13, 2008 02:39 pm Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
Ahh....another Casino Night. That's a briliant idea. I'm almost a bit sad the writers didn't think of it. Wouldn't that have been a fun trip down memory lane?
I'm looking forward to the next chapter :)
8 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2008 02:02 pm Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
I can't wait to see where you are going with this - I'm really looking forward to the next chapter! Good job!
Date: August 13, 2008 12:50 pm Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
Awesome story! I'm really excited to see where you go with this, looking forward to your update!
Date: August 13, 2008 11:38 am Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
This looks like a great story!
10 [Report This]Date: August 13, 2008 10:01 am Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
Oh I really want to see what happens with this!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Since its my first story I was a little nervous writing it. I'm writing another chapter tonight.
Date: August 13, 2008 08:09 am Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
Can't wait to see what happens...nice job! Seems very believable.
Author's Response: Thank you, thank you!
Date: August 13, 2008 08:06 am Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
Excellent story! Please continue.
B
Author's Response: I'm happy that some people liked this-I'll be doing another chapter tonight. Thank you!
Date: August 13, 2008 06:44 am Title: Chapter 1: Casino Night....again
Nice job, interesting idea, please keep writing. Can't wait to see how it goes.