Date: March 04, 2024 04:07 am Title: Chapter 1
Pretty good!
7 [Report This]Date: August 30, 2008 09:05 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was sad and sweet and romantic and heartbreaking, all rolled into one. Nicely done.
Date: August 26, 2008 07:03 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was so beautiful! I was so captivated and so in the moment the whole time I was reading it. I love how you wrote Pam's reaction - it seemed perfectly in character. I wish there was more haha! I'm looking forward to other stories of yours
9 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2008 07:11 am Title: Chapter 1
Wow...intense. Nice job, inthestars.
10 [Report This]Date: August 26, 2008 06:17 am Title: Chapter 1
Oh, this is so beautiful and so bittersweet at the same time. I love the soft, quiet, honest Jim and Pam. But of course they wouldn't be Jim and Pam without that hurdle of fear they can't fully jump over. I'm all teary right now.
This is my favorite fanfic that I've read in a while. If I had the deciding powers, it would get a ribbon.
One comment, though... Jim doesn't have blue eyes. They're hazel.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! That's so nice of you! I'm so glad you like it so much. *beams*rnYou're right; they're just not them without that fear. :)rnrnUGH THANK YOU. I'd been like DYING over over what his eye color was. Seriously scouring the internet and looking at pictures I dubbed exhibit A, B, etc. They just CHANGE color. I should've known. I hate those little inaccuracies. I fixed it. :)