Date: August 28, 2008 02:32 pm Title: Sales Call
a-freaking-dorable. Feel free to fill in the blanks of any other 'missing' chapters of the Pam/Jim saga.
Author's Response: I'm working on it, Lisa. It's all about finding those gaps that intrigue me. I noticed that someone on the boards recently compiled a list of moments we'd like to see. I'm working on one of my own that doesn't appear on that list right now, but maybe I'll play around with those options next..
Date: August 28, 2008 02:29 pm Title: Sales Call
*NanReg claps wildly* Talkative, I am pretty dang near euphorically happy right now. I am also in awe that you managed to make mini golf rather scorching ; )
This: "He smelled good, tasted better, and she either wanted to forget that immediately or keep it at the very front of her mind for a long time" and this: "It was insane, but she was thinking about kissing him, to see if she could find out what the look in his eyes had to do with her..." turn me into a puddle. I'm going to take a few minutes to compose myself and then read this again. Thanks for ending my work day on a high note.
Author's Response: What? Didn't you already think mini-golf was sexy? Or was that just me? Happy to hear you liked your story, Tink. :)
10 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2008 02:29 pm Title: Sales Call
Oh, as always, just wonderful. You have a gift for the details . . . the young couple golfing in front of them, the dialogue that means so much more than the actual words said, the heartbreaking looks. I love the fics that go back in time (although they often reinforce my heartache for Jim). Great job as usual, talkative!
Author's Response: Hey, wend. Glad you liked sad little Jim. I seem to be continuing to serve as a "Philly Jim" remedy. I'm cool with that. :)
9 [Report This]Date: August 28, 2008 02:21 pm Title: Sales Call
*clap* I believe!
Count me in as one who wanted to see a golf-pencil story. This was really sweet. And this broke my heart a little:
He smiled with one side of his mouth, but there was that same sadness in his eyes. "Am I?"
Nice job, Talkative :)
Author's Response: Thank you, callisto. I actually hadn't written anything that takes place prior to "The Job," so this was a fun little adventure for me. I'm really enjoying "Spectrum," btw, so keep at it. Start making up colors if you have to.