Date: September 26, 2010 08:58 pm Title: Okay
This is such a great idea, and so well written. I know it has been a long time since it was posted, but I wanted to put in a plea to have it updated. Any chance the inspiration is still there?
In particular, I love your portrayal of Season two Pam. The few gesture do a better job of conveying her mindset than any longer description could. Here's hoping to see more of it!
Date: June 09, 2010 11:25 pm Title: Okay
well this is old...and i dont see the next part!!! come on this is one of he good ones!!!!! upload!!!
Date: November 30, 2008 05:54 pm Title: Okay
I really love this fic. I hope you continue it!
10 [Report This]Date: September 21, 2008 07:06 pm Title: Okay
Wow! I'm in, cannot wait to see how this plays, thanks... can't wait for more. Poor Jim, but he'll help her remember. I hope..
Date: September 20, 2008 03:47 pm Title: Okay
Wow! This is really well written and a really good idea for a story. I am oh so very excited for your next chapter.
10 [Report This]Date: September 03, 2008 02:57 pm Title: Okay
Wow...Great start!! I was totally not expecting her to say that and when she did I literally gasped. Can't wait for more!! :)
10 [Report This]Date: September 02, 2008 05:30 pm Title: Okay
I thought she was joking when I first read that last line...Then I read it again!!! Holy Crap!!
Author's Response: Hee. I love that reaction! That's kind of what I was going for. Thanks so much.
9 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2008 08:03 pm Title: Okay
Alright. It was very, very unexpected. I thought that the little twist made the story much more interesting because without the twist in storyline, it'd be a boring story about how Pam remembers Jim and she's fine and doesn't have amnesia and it's all rainbows and butterflies.
I think the approach is really great and I can't wait to read the next chapter. Great work!
Author's Response: Lol! No rainbows and butterflies here. At least, not for a few chapters. I'm glad this wasn't too predictable for you. Thanks for the review!
7 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2008 07:13 pm Title: Okay
Uh oh. This should be interesting!
PS I loved this line:
"The air contorted into a rubbery kind of tension that stretched around them and between them and filled up the empty spaces in the room."
Author's Response: That's one of my favorite lines too. I love it when people quote the lines you're really proud of back to you. Thank you for your comments. Hope you enjoy the ride!
Date: September 01, 2008 06:06 pm Title: Okay
I read this before a 3 hr car trip and it put a huge smile on my face. It definitely gave me something to think about the whole way home. Can't wait for more of the story...Although, I think you could just end it right here!
Author's Response: Wow, cool! I'm glad I could give you some food for thought. I did think of ending it there at one point, but then I got some ideas for where it would go and I just couldn't stop. Thanks for the review!
Date: September 01, 2008 02:33 pm Title: Okay
Ooooh. That was unexpected. Great story - hurry and write more!
Mint
Author's Response: Thanks. I will get to work. Lol!
Date: September 01, 2008 01:33 pm Title: Okay
:)I love it so far!
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope you like the rest too!
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2008 01:26 pm Title: Okay
This definitely warrents an "Oh My God!!" I'm hooked already! More soon please!lol
Date: September 01, 2008 10:59 am Title: Okay
Oh, boy! This should be quite a ride...
I really liked this line:
The look on her face that night--just before she'd gotten cold and left him out there to wallow in his cowardice--was the same as the one she wore now.
Cliffhangers are good, by the way. :)
Author's Response: Callisto! You know I'm quite fond of your work, so it really means a lot that you're reading this and took the time to respond. I tend to like it when authors refer to a specific moment in the show in the description of a look on a character's face. I think it helps to visualize it, you know? I'm glad you liked the cliffhanger, too. :D
Date: September 01, 2008 09:00 am Title: Okay
OH.MY.GOODNESS! You have to update soon!
Author's Response: Don't worry! I'm working on the next part now. Thanks for the review and the encouragement!
Date: September 01, 2008 08:23 am Title: Okay
Whoa! Did not expect that! Awesome! Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks, Jinxcoke! I'm so glad you liked it, and that you were surprised by the end. More is coming soon!
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2008 08:18 am Title: Okay
okay wow you totally threw me for a loop there. I cannot wait for more! Cliche or not I am so intrigued.
Author's Response: Awesome. That's pretty much what I was going for. Thanks for the review!
Date: September 01, 2008 08:16 am Title: Okay
I was just thinking the other day about someone writing a story where Pam or Jim gets amnesia. Very excited to see where this is going.
Author's Response: I was really surprised it hasn't been done before (and if it has, I couldn't find it). This will be a bit different, because it's not total amnesia. Pam has just reverted back to S2. I thought there was a lot more potential there. I'm glad you're excited! Thanks for the review.
Date: September 01, 2008 08:14 am Title: Okay
I am totally totally staying tuned for the nest chapter. Cliche or not, this is good. ^_^
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad I got you hooked.
Date: September 01, 2008 08:04 am Title: Okay
Poor Jim. He just can't catch a break. Well, I'm curious to see how he deals with this one!
Author's Response: Yeah, this is not going to be easy on our dear Jim. But he's in a different place than he was in S2, so he's got that going for him. Don't worry.
Date: September 01, 2008 07:55 am Title: Okay
Oh my god, i so didn't see this coming. So excited.
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad it surprised you. That's what I was going for. :D
Date: September 01, 2008 07:14 am Title: Okay
Oh man that was an awesome cliffhanger. Definitely can't wait to see what happens next.
Author's Response: Thanks! I hope to live up to your expectations!
9 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2008 05:54 am Title: Okay
Doh! Your comment before the story alluded to this, but I was expecting her not to remember Jim at all. Wasn't expecting her to think she was still with Roy! Poor Jim has to start Wooing all over again!
Author's Response: That's where I tried to be a little original. The basic concept for this was to put S2 Pam with S4 Jim and see what happens. Jim's definitely got some wooing to do. Thanks for your comments!
9 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2008 05:02 am Title: Okay
WOW! What a twist, I did not see that coming. Please update soon, can't wait to see where story goes!
Author's Response: I wanted the end to be a surprise, so I'm glad it worked for you! I hope you like the rest of it, too. Thanks.
10 [Report This]Date: September 01, 2008 01:21 am Title: Okay
oh wow. I did NOT see that one coming at the end there...whoa. update asap please?
Author's Response: Cool. I was hoping the twist would be surprising. Part two should be coming soon.