Date: July 30, 2006 07:20 pm Title: Chapter 1
This is so sad. "She's back to being Pam Beesly, and her emergency contact is her mom, and it's like it's 2005 again, like maybe Jim still works here and she's 26 and life hadn't quite yet become this tunnel she can't get out of." I empathize so much with her feeling that her life is regressing. Poor Pam.
Date: July 24, 2006 01:10 am Title: Chapter 1
This was so depressing, but beautiful. I loved it.
Date: July 14, 2006 02:25 pm Title: Chapter 1
Sad and well-written and immensely believable. Sigh.
Date: July 12, 2006 10:14 pm Title: Chapter 1
Nice! Loved this line: "...the way he looks at you, like he's heard everything and nothing will surprise him."
Date: July 12, 2006 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 1
Dang. So sad, but yeah, I could see it: Pam's resigned hand gesture; the margarita as a wistful callback to the Dundies; lonely Toby's daughter moving out of state. And Toby has that "safe" quality Pam would feel comfortable with. Oh, and the "Iran" bit was a good wince-y touch.