9 [Report This]Date: May 09, 2008 10:31 am Title: Epilogue
I really enjoyed this fic. At some points, Jim and Pam seemed slightly OOC, but it didn't really matter too much for what was happening.
Anyway, thanks for writing this, I could never write fanfiction that way so I really appreciate it :)
Date: March 29, 2008 12:06 am Title: Epilogue
yay... i liked it alot, your stories rock moxie
5 [Report This]Date: January 26, 2008 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 1
OK, well I have good and bad things to say regarding this story. I'll start
with the good.
First of all, you mentioned in your author notes that this was your first fanfiction attempt, and on that note I have to commend you on the sheer length of this. I really liked how this was AU with a mixture of events that were based off of the show, and your grammar is satisfactory. These aspects really added to the enjoyability of this fic.
However, there were many things that bothered me too, primarily the general OOC-ness of it all. For example, did Pam really have to cry every 5 minutes? Also, (imho)the JAM banter was slightly off in some ways, for example, Pam and Jim called each other "Halpert" and "Beesley" way too much than they actually do in the show. So that kind of turned me off.
Little stuff like that probably shouldn't bother me;a fanfic really can't be exactly like the show and this was, after all, AU. Just felt like it had to be said.
PS: To my discredit, I actually did not finish this fanfic, and I have yet to read any of your other fanfics. So I might be being unfair or something.
Date: October 12, 2007 08:25 pm Title: Chapter 5
So I probably shouldn't be giving serious consideration to calling that number and seeing if it really *is* Jim Halpert, right? It seems my addiction has gone too far. Okay, I'm going to refrain from reviewing every chapter of this fic, but before I go I will add that this is just perfectly spot-on - for both of them individually, for their situation, for their relationship. Wonderful.
Date: October 12, 2007 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 4
"There ISN'T a point! A Lexus demands to be driven fast, to be pushed to its limits." Andy snorted. "You try telling that to a goddamn Connecticut State Trooper."
This made me laugh out loud in the solitude of my apartment. My neighbors may or may not be considering institutionalizing me right now.
I am in love with this fic. You write Fancy New Beesley just right, and this whole email exchange is just perfect. Way to go.
Date: September 24, 2007 06:40 pm Title: Epilogue
Moxie,
It's so weird to think that when you started this fic, I was just starting to watch the show, and didn't even know that Office messageboards existed. And now, look how far I've come. I'm really honored to have met all of the fans and authors here, especially such a great writer as yourself. You should really feel a sense of accomplishment for finishing this. It's a epic undertaking to write a 30 some-odd chapter story over such a long period of time and keep it fresh and plot driven with such a great ending. So congrats!
And these awesome lines sum up our wish for S4:
things are only suppose to get better when you move beyond friendship. Not worse, and not entirely different. Who we are hasn't changed. You're still my best friend; why wouldn't it be this easy to laugh and joke around despite the fact that I'm still dying to make love to you?
Thanks again, Mox! :)
Date: September 23, 2007 05:00 pm Title: Epilogue
So, so good. Moxie, it has been a marathon, and a very well done marathon at that. I am sure I say it every chapter, but this one is so well done. I love the begining, establishing their routine, and the emails, really cute and well don. This story always feels real to me. Yay. So glad it is done and and to know the ending (which was also awesome) but so sad to not have any more.
10 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2007 04:53 pm Title: Epilogue
Amazing, amazing, amazing story time4moxie. I love everything you've written but Distance Learning is by far my favourite. So playful and loving, just as I see Pam and Jim. Thanks a bunch!
Date: September 23, 2007 03:01 pm Title: Chapter 1
When I saw that you had updated this knowing it was the end I was sad. It was an incredible ride and I only hope you countinue to write. You are an incredible writer.
Date: September 23, 2007 01:15 pm Title: Epilogue
That's so happy! I love that you ended it here, with her decision to make a big leap for him. and i love his desire for her to know that she is loved for everything she is and everything they are together and things don't have to be different. I love this so much. it's been great fun keeping up with it. great job!!!
10 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2007 12:54 pm Title: Epilogue
I'm so sad to see this story go! I hope you write a sequel someday! I feel like this story has been such a big part of me for so long!
Date: September 23, 2007 12:48 pm Title: Epilogue
Loved the added bit about Sunday, Cranky , Sunday and them arguing because Sunday was just inherently evil. What? That's not what you meant? Well, I can tell you that is part of it, coming from someone who had a LDR until I convinced HooHusband to move in with me.
"I've learned I'm happier when I ask for what I want." Yeah! Go FNB!
"I guess the idea just hit me that I never expected being together like this would be so much fun." LOVE Jim explaining to Pam how things get so much better when you are in love with your best friend (and not with that dumbass Roy who had no idea what he had). "You're just not used to being loved the way you deserve to be." Yeah, I can totally hear Jim saying that.
And the whole exchange with the two of them trying to resolve the long-distance issue -- each deciding to move had a little O Henry vibe to it. In other words, very nice. A clever way to tie up the loose ends of the branch merger.
Wow. Epic Fan Fic. Nicely done, Mox.
Enjoy some cake.
Date: September 23, 2007 11:33 am Title: Epilogue
Wow, Mox. What can I say that hasn't been said, oh...323(!) times? This ends just as it began - clever, sexy, funny and with lots of heart. In other words, a Moxie-fest. I like how you bring so much heat during their phone call, without ever saying specifically what they're doing...well done. Sorry to see it end...it's been a hell of a ride!
10 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2007 11:09 am Title: Chapter 1
Uh, yeah... Is it getting a bit warm in here? Verrry nice.
I love this story so much. What a great finale, and it ties in perfectly with the upcoming season. Just awesome, Moxie! Bring on the healing and the smooching. :D
10 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2007 11:08 am Title: Epilogue
Oh, Moxie... Heh... What a way to end it. :)
Happy Birthday, DL! My how you have grown. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 23, 2007 10:40 am Title: Epilogue
I could go on about how amazing this is, but I think I've probably told you every single opinion about this already. I will, however, tell you that this has been a fun ride. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us :) Simply put, you rock!
Date: September 11, 2007 07:40 pm Title: Chapter 30
I love all your stories.. they breathe life back into Jim and Pam! Not only get me back on track to be obsessed by it. ;)
10 [Report This]Date: August 29, 2007 11:11 am Title: Chapter 30
Fabulous! I loved it! Thanks for many entertaining hours!
10 [Report This]Date: August 24, 2007 09:07 am Title: Chapter 30
This is some great stuff you've got here. I'm not really sure what else to say that I haven't already. While I am sad to think there is only one more chapter of this left, I am not too sad because I am well aware there is plenty more where this came from.
Date: August 23, 2007 03:03 pm Title: Chapter 30
30 chapters and I still don't want it to end! Sexy text messaging and phone sex are the best thing to hit fanfic since the first date. :-)
This is such a great story, and I'm going to be very sad when it's all over. Great job, Moxie!
Date: August 23, 2007 09:12 am Title: Chapter 3
Ok I know I'm late reading/reviewing this, but I'm catching up with things. And I wanted to comment on this chapter because this: "It doesn't do any good to lie in bed and cry, so you might as well come in and keep your mind off how terrible your life is going" made me LITERALLY laugh out loud. Hilarious. Just really really funny.
Date: August 23, 2007 12:16 am Title: Chapter 30
I for sure think that was the best of the 30 chaoters thus far. Seriously awesome.
I usually hate it when Kelly is portrayed as a dumb girly-girl, but this was a great combo of dumb and funny and girly and just perfect.
And, wow, all the texting and the order of the beginning (learning about when she went back after learning about Monday morning) was just perfect.
Oh, it was so good, I really think it was my favortie chapter of them all. The Jim/Pam interaction from afar was spot on, sweet and witty. Just to die for perfection. Loved it!!
Date: August 22, 2007 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 30
MOXIE! i know, it's been ages...
Anyway, i had to review cuz this chapter was fantastic. i was smiling all the way thru and just loved it all, the texting, the banter, the whole kelly thinking her new man is a doctor. oh, it was perfect. and just what i needed. i've been straying from office stuff for ages this summer, but the closer we get to sept the more anxious i am! bring it on, season 4!!!
Date: August 22, 2007 08:37 pm Title: Chapter 30
I have always wanted to send you flowers. Love you. Jim.
This is by far one the sweetest and most romantic lines ever. I have enjoyed this story from afar for so long. It has been my fanfic-crush.
Date: August 22, 2007 07:16 pm Title: Chapter 30
Oh. My. Seems to be a bit of phone sex going around. NOT COMPLAINING, BTW.
Even I was excited to (figuratively) see Pam's flowers. Aww. And I love clueless Kelly.