10 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2006 06:26 am Title: Chapter 8
EEEEE - what a sexy chapter! Once again I was hoping she'd tell him to drive up immediately - though for a second, I thought, but wait....he's been drinking; he shouldn't drive. He could call a cab!
Sad that I'm this invested in fictional characters, isn't it? Okay, off to read the final chapter....
10 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2006 06:21 am Title: Chapter 7
Deep exhalation because I didn't realize I was holding my breath. Wow. Okay, so this was a brilliant idea - late night phone call, alcohol to loosen inhibitions....three things game. Sigh. And Jonathan! Ahhhh - Jonathan!! :o) Gotta go read the next chapter....
Author's Response: I couldn't resist mentioning Jonathan. I've loved his character in other stories...
10 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2006 06:14 am Title: Chapter 6
Ah! NO time for a review - have to get to the next chapter! Loving this!
Date: October 05, 2006 06:01 am Title: Chapter 5
Oh wow - first, love the last lines and LOVE seeing Pam so ready to make it all up to him. Second, while I totally agree with the whole making-them-wait thing (for which I have been ribbed on TWoP for being guilty of initially - kindly ribbed, I should say, as opposed to the nastiness over there right now), I was DYING for her to say, "Yes, yes you should drive up here IMMEDIATELY." Oh, this story is so damned good!
Date: October 05, 2006 05:46 am Title: Chapter 4
Ah! It's over? I gotta get to the next chapter! EEEE!
And I think your chapter lengths are working just fine, by the way - my comment is out of eagerness to read what comes next. :o)
God, I am loving this story! (Does it show?)
Date: October 05, 2006 05:38 am Title: Chapter 3
Okay, so I got butterflies in my stomach - swear to god - as she was painstakingly going through each email before reading his. And I'm grinning from ear to ear at their exchanges - it makes complete sense that they'd immediately fall into flirting via email - not to mention that they definitely wouldn't stop at just one. I love it that neither of them is really trying to play it cool at this point - i.e. I won't reply for another four hours, that sort of thing.
I'll say it again: If only you were writing for the show.... BRAVO!
Okay, next chapter.....
Date: October 05, 2006 05:34 am Title: Chapter 2
Gah! I love this -- you've got his voice down so well, too! And I love the shifting points of view as well, so that we know what both of them are thinking. His email to her seemed spot on; I could definitely see him writing that. Also his assessment of Pam's email - "And it was so classically Pam. Play detached – play like you don't care – and then see if it gets a response. That way if he didn't reply, she could act like she never expected one." -- absolutely right. So very Pam.
Wow! Okay, next chapter....
By the way - did you say this was your first fic? Because holy god, woman - it's really terrific.
Date: October 05, 2006 05:29 am Title: Chapter 1
Okay, so I've been saving your story for when I had a chunk of time to read it, and I have to say - this is awesome so far! I think you really do a great job of capturing her interior monologue - both justifying why she hasn't contacted him in so long, while at the same time leading us through her train of thought leading up to the moment when she sends that email. Now if only you were writing for the show.... :o) Seriously, I love it that she sent the email - and it, too, was perfect by the way! Moving on to the next chapter....
Date: October 05, 2006 05:05 am Title: Chapter 9
Oh I was so hoping that's how it would end. LOVE IT.
MORE. SOON.
Please????
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it - I'll start working on the next chapter soon, I'm just waiting for Pam to tell me where she wants it to go! ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 05, 2006 12:52 am Title: Chapter 9
I love it! "Please write Chapter 10 soon," she said.
10 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2006 10:34 pm Title: Chapter 9
Delightful, as always!
Sweetie, would you like me to try to fix your formatting? I can, since I'm an admin.
Shoot me a message (by clicking on my name) if you would like me to.
Date: October 04, 2006 05:34 pm Title: Chapter 8
Bold Jim is so much fun! And love-declaring, romantic Jim is obviously wonderful as well. That was a very sweet and fun conversation :)
Author's Response:
Bold!Jim just makes me melt. Pam's so lucky he only shows that side to her, of she'd have some serious competition! ;-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2006 12:49 pm Title: Chapter 8
I just read this all at once and am really enjoying it. Jim should just drive to Scranton! Get in the car, Jim!
Date: October 04, 2006 06:08 am Title: Chapter 8
Jim is just so cute. I can totally see him teasing Pam like that.
10 [Report This]Date: October 04, 2006 12:54 am Title: Chapter 8
Awww, I love that last line! These calls are just so much fun. I am just a sucker for good banter. Nice job. :)
Author's Response: Thank you - I was worried the calls weren't sounded natural enough.
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 09:31 pm Title: Chapter 8
oh, i loved that last line! ack, where is my jim? i love this story :)
Date: October 03, 2006 08:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
Love this story, I get excited when I see the update. I'm glad they are taking it slow and TALKING, not straight getting physical. Their relationship was a connection of minds and hearts way before it can ever get physical they have to unite the same was they were before (minds and hearts)
Great story.
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 08:29 pm Title: Chapter 8
amazing! keep going this is great!
Author's Response: Thank you! It motivates me so much to know people actually like it. :-)
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 07:51 pm Title: Chapter 8
I hope you're planning to do at least one chapter of them together, because you're doing a terrific job of them apart!
Author's Response:
Oh yes. If only for the satisfaction of my own Jammer heart. :-D
Thanks for the kind words.
10 [Report This]Date: October 03, 2006 05:09 pm Title: Chapter 7
Awesome chapter! I love that game they were playing - not sure if you made it up or its real but it is cute! And I absolutely loved Jim's second saddest moment. Perfect. I love this story, can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I made up the game; it just sounded like something Pam would come up with. :-)
Date: October 03, 2006 06:15 am Title: Chapter 7
Yeah, I just caught up with this yesterday, so now I can't wait to read more. Gah, WIPs make me crazy because I want it all NOW...
Date: October 03, 2006 06:13 am Title: Chapter 7
Now that was a sad moment.
Date: October 02, 2006 10:33 pm Title: Chapter 7
Sweetly in character and very engaging. Can't wait for more!
Date: October 02, 2006 08:34 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh, you are just killer at ending with these provocative cliffhangers!
Anyway, loved this chapter - great conversation and I really enjoy how they seem to be getting more and more openly flirty.
10 [Report This]Date: October 02, 2006 08:21 pm Title: Chapter 7
Go Jim! Pam was just asking for that one. I can't even believe how excited I am for you to update. This is currently my favorite story.
Also, Jim asking Pam to send him a picture of her in the nightdress? So, so hot.
Author's Response: Thanks - you're so sweet! I admit I've become a bit addicted to this story myself, so I hope to have yet another chapter done tomorrow night. (Or wednesday the latest.)