Date: August 02, 2009 06:22 pm Title: Part 1
i get it now. thanks for taking the time to explain! keep going with the story, very fun to read.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you understand it!
Date: August 02, 2009 05:55 pm Title: Part 7
ahhhhh! absolutely perfect!
Date: August 02, 2009 05:54 pm Title: Part 6
best chapter so far. so perfectly written!
Date: August 02, 2009 05:54 pm Title: Part 5
cute!
Date: August 02, 2009 05:53 pm Title: Part 4
didn't understand this one - can't you explain it to me?
Author's Response: Sure, I'll explain! It would have been more obvious if it could have been over 55 words! So the "eight minutes and thirty five seconds" thing is the time they spent in his car together. The first few chapters were in the rain, right after he proposed, but this one is a few minutes after they went into his car to, well, you know. Spend some "time" together. ;)
Date: August 02, 2009 05:52 pm Title: Part 3
the last line is beautiful, so perfect for ph&j to be!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! :)
Date: August 02, 2009 05:51 pm Title: Part 2
nice one!
Date: August 02, 2009 05:50 pm Title: Part 1
awww! if only jim had chosen somewhere more romantic than the gas station... nice job, these 55 worders are hard!
Author's Response: I agree! The fanfic for it would have been soo much more beautiful and romantic if only he proposed somewhere beautiful and romantic!! Thanks so much for the comment!
Date: August 02, 2009 05:29 am Title: Part 6
He’s had the ring for weeks but the wish for years
So, so, so, so cute!
Author's Response: Thanks so much!!
Date: April 22, 2009 03:37 pm Title: Part 6
soooo cute, i loved this
Date: September 29, 2008 04:01 pm Title: Part 6
oh, wow. Those were potent! I really admire how you were able to fit so much emotion into such small packages...
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much Pigeon! rnI really appreciate it! ;)
10 [Report This]Date: September 28, 2008 11:45 am Title: Part 5
These are beautiful. I'm enjoying them very much. I hope you keep going. (TWSS, obviously.)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm very glad to hear you are enjoying them. Yes, they will keep going. (Whats TWSS?)
Date: September 27, 2008 07:17 pm Title: Part 1
Wonderful. Just like the ep. I need more.
Author's Response: thank you so, so much! rnmore will be coming, i assure you.rni wanted the episode to last hours longer!!
Date: September 27, 2008 01:08 pm Title: Part 2
very poetic and beautiful. I've always wished I could write in such a stylized manner. wonderful job
Author's Response: thank you very, very much!!!