9 [Report This]Date: July 14, 2009 03:10 pm Title: I.
WOW. you make the words flow so beautifully. bravo!
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I really appreciate it!
Date: November 08, 2008 11:30 am Title: III.
Still enjoying the beauty of your writing. Can't wait for next chapter.
Author's Response: Thank you SO much!
9 [Report This]Date: November 03, 2008 06:53 pm Title: III.
Love it! I love the bit about her needing him to feel worthless! So great
I'm excited for more
Author's Response: Yay!rnI'm so glad you enjoyed it. :)
Date: October 14, 2008 06:53 pm Title: II.
He cannot tell if he is crazy or just confused, but either way, the ache of knowing how she doesn't know is enough to keep him up at one thirty six in the morning, hating himself for hating her.
This is all SO good. You amaze me again with your beautiful words, this time from Jim's POV. Can't wait for the next installment. :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I like that line, too. rnI'm so thrilled that you are enjoying it! rnPart III is on the way... :)
Date: October 13, 2008 08:03 pm Title: II.
i like this a lot! We never get enough of how Pam must have been affect too - she didn't just have a 180 degree turn when he went to Stamford or anything :P This is really great!
Author's Response: I completely agree! Thank you so much!
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 07:27 pm Title: II.
Truthfully, if he had to put his sorrow into words, he’d write about how he can’t sleep anymore, how he barely listens to his favorite songs because the lyrics that mean so much to him remind him of the girl that means too much, and how he can’t look people in the eye and say, “yeah, I’m fine,” because he knows all too well that he’s completely lying.
You're killing me, Dwangie. How you summed up my break-up with my own Jim from Pam's POV in the first chapter and now from Jim's POV in the second chapter is astounding to me. Are you a mind-reader or something? ;P
Author's Response: Hahahaha thank you so much! And no, unfortunately, I'm not a mind-reader. rnThank you very, very much! And I'm sorry to hear about your own break-up, but I'm glad I could somehow put it into a different perspective. ;)
8 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 07:15 pm Title: I.
"And no matter how much she tries to convince herself that she focuses on him because there is nothing else, she knows, deep down in the ache of a midnight cry, that he’s the only thing worth making a dream about."
"Maybe, if she tried a little harder, she could replace all the if’s in her life with a reason as to why she is wasting her life dreaming of someone who doesn’t dream of her. "
I don't want to be repetitive and quote the same passages as the first 2 reviewers - but I can't help it. They were both so beautifully written and make me wonder how poor Pam ever survived S3.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love to hear that my writing has the same affect on multiple people. I wonder about how Pam survived, too, and that's why I write about it! rnThanks so, so much!
9 [Report This]Date: October 13, 2008 09:48 am Title: I.
Wow. I really like your writing style. You capture Pam's angst so well. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I really appreciate it!rnPart II. is in the process of being written (specifically 1/2 done). rnTHANKS AGAIN!
Date: October 12, 2008 09:13 am Title: I.
There's so many great things about this first chapter. You've gotten me so involved in their world already. There are many great lines here, but the two that grabbed me the most were the last one, and this one:
And no matter how much she tries to convince herself that she focuses on him because there is nothing else, she knows, deep down in the ache of a midnight cry, that he's the only thing worth making a dream about. Guh!!! So, so good.
Author's Response: Thank you so, so much!! I'm thrilled to hear that you're involved! And I love that line, too. I spent a lot of the time on the "ache of a midnight cry" thing because I needed something with a punch! Thanks again!!!rnPart II is on the way! :)
10 [Report This]Date: October 11, 2008 10:22 pm Title: I.
Maybe, if she tried a little harder, she could replace all the if’s in her life with a reason as to why she is wasting her life dreaming of someone who doesn’t dream of her.
This line broke my heart. Oh, Pam. :( Beautiful job, Dwangie, as usual.
Author's Response: Wow! Thank you so, so much!!