7 [Report This]Date: March 02, 2009 07:01 am Title: Move On
Just discovered this awesome story. I can't beleive it was your first - great job! I need to go read all the ones you've written since then.
Author's Response: Wow, thank you. I'm still pretty proud of this one so I'm very glad you like it!
10 [Report This]Date: November 18, 2008 09:09 pm Title: Stationary
This is really great stuff. Your stories are very good. I can't believe you haven't had more reviews! I hope you write more. I'm adding you to my fav authors to try and help pimp your stories ;)
Author's Response: Wow, thank you! :) I've been kind of in a writing funk lately, but I do believe you have just inspired me to jump back into it. I really appreciate your feedback ^___^
Date: October 15, 2008 11:29 am Title: Stationary
That was lovely writing, especially the poker analogy. Thank you.
Author's Response: Thank you ^___^ I almost died when I realized that it was mirrored earlier in the episode. Complete spaz attack. You're lucky you weren't here.
10 [Report This]Date: October 15, 2008 06:44 am Title: Stationary
Really outstanding, esp. for a first effort. I think this Jim is just dark enough, without being over the top and thus unrecognizable as Jim. You write very well and I hope you'll do more. Fluff is always good too. :)
Author's Response: Oohhh thank you very much~ I'll try to do some fluff :D
Date: October 15, 2008 06:02 am Title: Stationary
Poor Jim :(
He thinks it's ironic, how he went all in and she took everything. His heart, his sanity, his life, his job. And how she had done the exact same thing earlier in the evening, except it was only money then. Easier to read knowing that he gets the girl.
Nice job!
Author's Response: Poor, poor Jim, indeed. I got so bummed writing this.rnrnOh so easier to read, and write. I kept thinking "Weight Loss, Weight Loss, think of Weight Loss, dammit!" Thank you.