1 [Report This]Date: November 30, 2018 09:30 pm Title: Chapter 1
I like these “long, overwhelming sentences” that paint really beautiful images. Great job with unraveling their history and keeping it fresh with the two of them. Thank you for this lovely piece!
Date: May 29, 2009 04:19 am Title: Chapter 1
How come this hasn't had more reviews? This is lovely - beautifully done. You manage to capture how all encompassing the early days of love can be, without going too far. Well done!
8 [Report This]Date: January 09, 2009 11:01 am Title: Chapter 1
Really well written! I liked it!
10 [Report This]Date: January 07, 2009 01:19 pm Title: Chapter 1
but I love your long sentences!
I usually talk in long sentences during the day && that's fun for everyone xD
really, this fic is wonderful;;
I'm sooo stealing some of your lines for away messages (:
Date: January 07, 2009 05:12 am Title: Chapter 1
Lovely first fic! Your descriptive writing is so nice, and I love how well you described Pam's transition into who she's become. You hit all the emotional elements here. Welcome to MTT and again, fantastic job!